Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Note to Self?"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from QC Poet
Thank you for the insight and aspirations.
Do lines in four corners box us in?
Why do pondering and pontificating both give us a headache?
Thanks for Sharing
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Thank you for the insight and aspirations.
Do lines in four corners box us in?
Why do pondering and pontificating both give us a headache?
Thanks for Sharing
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
Comment from Ogden
Your poem is irrefutably altruistic, good advice, certain to be ignored by those whose concerns focus only on what they consider beneficial to themselves.
Best wishes this holiday season, Dr. Alcreator,
Don
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Your poem is irrefutably altruistic, good advice, certain to be ignored by those whose concerns focus only on what they consider beneficial to themselves.
Best wishes this holiday season, Dr. Alcreator,
Don
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
Comment from M. R. Kelly
Very interesting poem. Well done on the rhyming scheme. Thank you for contributing this piece and keep writing!I like how the poem starts and ends. !!!
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Very interesting poem. Well done on the rhyming scheme. Thank you for contributing this piece and keep writing!I like how the poem starts and ends. !!!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
Comment from rhonnie69
MERRY CHRISTMAS ALCREATOR: This posting speaks of how we writers can improve on how and what we write for our viewers to read. It is important how we present our thoughts in our words to the world. We writers have a need to get together and help each other produce wholesome literature. This posting is good for that, Thank you for sharing. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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MERRY CHRISTMAS ALCREATOR: This posting speaks of how we writers can improve on how and what we write for our viewers to read. It is important how we present our thoughts in our words to the world. We writers have a need to get together and help each other produce wholesome literature. This posting is good for that, Thank you for sharing. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from Violet WolfChild
I love this! A message to speak one's truth, without preaching or trying to sway another's belief. To write with purpose, to inspire the collective. This is absolutely beautiful. Great job, I see no faults with this one. Thanks for sharing.
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I love this! A message to speak one's truth, without preaching or trying to sway another's belief. To write with purpose, to inspire the collective. This is absolutely beautiful. Great job, I see no faults with this one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from way2gokevs
A great deal of sense in what you write. People need guidance but also need clear instructions, your verse gives lots of options, Nicely written, keep up the great work.
Have a great day.
Cheers, Kev
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A great deal of sense in what you write. People need guidance but also need clear instructions, your verse gives lots of options, Nicely written, keep up the great work.
Have a great day.
Cheers, Kev
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Note to Self, includes a plethora of items on a to-do list that holds a very high expectation. Remember, "convey no fallacies or controversial presumptions." : )
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This poem, Note to Self, includes a plethora of items on a to-do list that holds a very high expectation. Remember, "convey no fallacies or controversial presumptions." : )
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from kahpot
There is some excellent advice in these words, some that I will take notice of for my road of knowledge, and like you say I have taken notes, very well done****kahpot
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There is some excellent advice in these words, some that I will take notice of for my road of knowledge, and like you say I have taken notes, very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from royowen
I write almost everything, either talking to God personally, of Him, to glorify the one who cares about us so much. You've written this as an almost proverbial poem, advising how to conceptualise and write with as much integrity as one can muster. Well done, great write, blessings, Roy
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I write almost everything, either talking to God personally, of Him, to glorify the one who cares about us so much. You've written this as an almost proverbial poem, advising how to conceptualise and write with as much integrity as one can muster. Well done, great write, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Marvelous piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Educative as well as worth enjoying.
"Write simple, soft, symphonic word
Utter everything free of hard word"
Undoubtedly SIX!
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Hello Alcreator Litt Dear,
Marvelous piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Impressive, and perfectly matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth, and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Educative as well as worth enjoying.
"Write simple, soft, symphonic word
Utter everything free of hard word"
Undoubtedly SIX!
Comment Written 18-Dec-2018
