Man for God
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Comment from JudyE
I don't often comment on your writing as I have to admit I sometimes have trouble understanding it but this is so much clearer to me and really spoke to me. I really, really enjoyed it and it had a lovely rhythmic flow to it. Thanks for sharing.
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I don't often comment on your writing as I have to admit I sometimes have trouble understanding it but this is so much clearer to me and really spoke to me. I really, really enjoyed it and it had a lovely rhythmic flow to it. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Six Stars and a big Bravo! Your writing style is so unique and yet brilliant. Note to Self is an inspired poem. Your voice was meant to be heard by many.
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Six Stars and a big Bravo! Your writing style is so unique and yet brilliant. Note to Self is an inspired poem. Your voice was meant to be heard by many.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2019
Comment from artisart4u
Writing can be good therapy, a hobby or to give the audience insight on subjects they most desire to learn about or from. Sometimes people understand a subject
from a poem and song rather than in a non fiction or fiction form.
But whatever we choose, it should be our best form of communication.
Your advise and couplets are very nice and I see how you used punctuation marks in your poem. I learned in writing tat pauses take the place of commas, this lessens punctuation marks. It is relaxing.
Good luck.
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Writing can be good therapy, a hobby or to give the audience insight on subjects they most desire to learn about or from. Sometimes people understand a subject
from a poem and song rather than in a non fiction or fiction form.
But whatever we choose, it should be our best form of communication.
Your advise and couplets are very nice and I see how you used punctuation marks in your poem. I learned in writing tat pauses take the place of commas, this lessens punctuation marks. It is relaxing.
Good luck.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
Comment from LovnPeace
I agree so much with what you say. I loathe punctuation in poetry. I think it hardens the grace of it. Also and more importantly about God and honesty. Blessings, Barbara
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I agree so much with what you say. I loathe punctuation in poetry. I think it hardens the grace of it. Also and more importantly about God and honesty. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 21-Jan-2019
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for your primer for writing poetry and speaking the truth. I relished your "soft, symphonic word" and lack of unnecessary punctuation, plus the parallel picture you selected. Cheers- Joan
6/1/20:
I reread your post today, and appreciated your encouragement to write truthfully and objectively, while upholding human values and welfare. More cheers- Joan
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Thank you for your primer for writing poetry and speaking the truth. I relished your "soft, symphonic word" and lack of unnecessary punctuation, plus the parallel picture you selected. Cheers- Joan
6/1/20:
I reread your post today, and appreciated your encouragement to write truthfully and objectively, while upholding human values and welfare. More cheers- Joan
Comment Written 12-Jan-2019
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi ALD. This poem seems to be composed of random thoughts as they occurred to the writer. Sort of a recipe for writing and what the writer himself/herself gets from the creative process. This is the line that resonated most with me:
"Publish nothing for self-satisfaction only"
Although I must admit this is my favorite thing to do. We write for the sake of it, whether anybody else likes/reads it or not. Hopefully others do, though. Marilyn
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Hi ALD. This poem seems to be composed of random thoughts as they occurred to the writer. Sort of a recipe for writing and what the writer himself/herself gets from the creative process. This is the line that resonated most with me:
"Publish nothing for self-satisfaction only"
Although I must admit this is my favorite thing to do. We write for the sake of it, whether anybody else likes/reads it or not. Hopefully others do, though. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Jan-2019
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
This honestly reads like you have penned your self a series of notes as reminders and inspiration for your life... and lays out a path for life for others to take in and ponder upon. Very true to life and the pace and flow, almost gives a dairy feel about this piece. Really good to read ans know your thoughts, you have a good outlook and vision of life and how to lead it.
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This honestly reads like you have penned your self a series of notes as reminders and inspiration for your life... and lays out a path for life for others to take in and ponder upon. Very true to life and the pace and flow, almost gives a dairy feel about this piece. Really good to read ans know your thoughts, you have a good outlook and vision of life and how to lead it.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2018
Comment from Lisa Heath
This reviewer finds this poem very religious and inspiring as well! I, also am an accomplished poet, writer, poet laureate and poet critic like possibly you yourself and the esteemed Mr. Paul McCartney, aged 72. I read his very long autobiography, and I may recommend you read it as well and also a Christian Book if you can find it online called Son of a Carpenter.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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This reviewer finds this poem very religious and inspiring as well! I, also am an accomplished poet, writer, poet laureate and poet critic like possibly you yourself and the esteemed Mr. Paul McCartney, aged 72. I read his very long autobiography, and I may recommend you read it as well and also a Christian Book if you can find it online called Son of a Carpenter.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018
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Thank you for the advice. I am proud to learn you are such and such as you self-declared and designate yourself. I find your wisdom. I do not wish to learn anything new as you have suggested and advised. I need not learn anything more. If you re-read this review you can discover your wisdom. I am nothing before your stature. You are perhaps the wisest on earth, as you have claimed here, I think you may need to learn more but I do not like to learn anything as you advice or suggest. I am happy with my limited knowledge. I do not want to be wiser. Please stop reviewing my works because I think I cannot accept your help, suggestion or advice because I have stopped learning the sort of things that you suggest, advise me to read and learn. It would be wise if you do not review my post and thereby you can stop advising or suggesting me the sort of books for reading, for I have given you the reason. I shall ever remain thankful and grateful to you if you please, please, and please stop reviewing my works, of course, you can read my works if you like, and I know you being a wise person you would never take it personally and make it an issue. If you send reviews of my works in the future, I shall have no choice but to mute you positively. Wish you every success in your chosen goal. With best regards, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.
Comment from kleck140
You certainly have a way with words. Your poem for God's
appreciation as you state says it best. I am trying to learn
to write so eloquently. Keep on writing.
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You certainly have a way with words. Your poem for God's
appreciation as you state says it best. I am trying to learn
to write so eloquently. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
Comment from Miss Sherry
This is unvarnished truth and superb advice. We, as writers, have a responsibility to provide the world with our best efforts. To write shoddily offends He who created us, who wants only our best work. This is a very fine poem from which other writers can learn.
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This is unvarnished truth and superb advice. We, as writers, have a responsibility to provide the world with our best efforts. To write shoddily offends He who created us, who wants only our best work. This is a very fine poem from which other writers can learn.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2018
