Man for God
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Comment from oliver black
Summing up my review succinctly, I submit the following for the author of "Note To Self"
Above all else attempt brevity-
Something someone must have forgotten
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Summing up my review succinctly, I submit the following for the author of "Note To Self"
Above all else attempt brevity-
Something someone must have forgotten
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from moongirlwriter
I think you need to send this to all the journalists in the US. I haven't seen any of them write with such truth in the last four years. I like this poem I believe to be written in a journalistic style. Today, I'm embarrassed to even be called a journalist. . .so I write on the lighter side. You seem to have captured the gift and nature of writing. Best of luck to you with this piece.
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I think you need to send this to all the journalists in the US. I haven't seen any of them write with such truth in the last four years. I like this poem I believe to be written in a journalistic style. Today, I'm embarrassed to even be called a journalist. . .so I write on the lighter side. You seem to have captured the gift and nature of writing. Best of luck to you with this piece.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Sylvia Page
Alcreator, this is a fun read but it is all too true. You write a great poem setting a creation of rules for your self which is suitable for all of us
Fanstorians. Great work. Thank you and best regards
Sylvia
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Alcreator, this is a fun read but it is all too true. You write a great poem setting a creation of rules for your self which is suitable for all of us
Fanstorians. Great work. Thank you and best regards
Sylvia
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Nicole Hawley
AlCreator I'm so glad to review one of your poems I so appreciate that you're one of my regular readers! :) This was almost like a 10 Commandments for Poets. I liked how you broke it into stanzas because we got a moment to reflect on each of your declarations. I will be sure to use this and/or think about when I write from now on. Nice write, thanks!
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AlCreator I'm so glad to review one of your poems I so appreciate that you're one of my regular readers! :) This was almost like a 10 Commandments for Poets. I liked how you broke it into stanzas because we got a moment to reflect on each of your declarations. I will be sure to use this and/or think about when I write from now on. Nice write, thanks!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Artasylum
I think of all of the stuff I've read from your pen Alcreator... I love the call/response form you have used here... thanks so much for the fun read. yours, dana
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I think of all of the stuff I've read from your pen Alcreator... I love the call/response form you have used here... thanks so much for the fun read. yours, dana
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Diana L Crawford
You have created such a rhythmic and flowing piece. I love how you set your wording up for each beginning line and my favorite one is "Write a simple, soft, symphonic word". It feels like your singing a song! very beautiful!
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You have created such a rhythmic and flowing piece. I love how you set your wording up for each beginning line and my favorite one is "Write a simple, soft, symphonic word". It feels like your singing a song! very beautiful!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
I can say that without a doubt you made the 'comma huggers' extremely happy with this LOL. I thoroughly enjoyed this as you weave information and inspiration seamlessly from beginning to end. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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I can say that without a doubt you made the 'comma huggers' extremely happy with this LOL. I thoroughly enjoyed this as you weave information and inspiration seamlessly from beginning to end. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
its a perfect match
So where in my confused mind I recall dipping my pen in a well( a circle cut in a desk filled with ink, in my youth.
Any ooh
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
its a perfect match
So where in my confused mind I recall dipping my pen in a well( a circle cut in a desk filled with ink, in my youth.
Any ooh
You captured my attention from the first line to the last
This is what I call a food for thought poem
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
Sounds like nice, good advice. Write from the heart, but not to counsel others, just to please. Be careful not to harm others with your words. Nice job.
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ALD,
Sounds like nice, good advice. Write from the heart, but not to counsel others, just to please. Be careful not to harm others with your words. Nice job.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
Comment from Karen Luciana
Hi,
I appreciate the message in your poem, and I think you do a fantastic job with the flow and rhythm of your words. You used assonance and alliteration. You are a great writer.
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Hi,
I appreciate the message in your poem, and I think you do a fantastic job with the flow and rhythm of your words. You used assonance and alliteration. You are a great writer.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
