Man for God
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Comment from estory
You built up a nice hip hop rhythm in this poem, some different musical elements for you. It was interesting, and very obtuse, very open to approach from different angles. A poem asking for contemplation, to be read with an open mind, that takes you into the world of joys in creating poetry. estory
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You built up a nice hip hop rhythm in this poem, some different musical elements for you. It was interesting, and very obtuse, very open to approach from different angles. A poem asking for contemplation, to be read with an open mind, that takes you into the world of joys in creating poetry. estory
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from pome lover
Congratulations on your awards!
This is a mighty tough order to adhere to, all of these things, but you express them well.
I especially like the third and next to last stanzas.
You have very high standards and aspirations. Good for you!
I would like to ask, if you don't mind, what do people call you? I would like to say your first name when I "talk" to you - if that's okay with you.
Katharine - pome lover
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Congratulations on your awards!
This is a mighty tough order to adhere to, all of these things, but you express them well.
I especially like the third and next to last stanzas.
You have very high standards and aspirations. Good for you!
I would like to ask, if you don't mind, what do people call you? I would like to say your first name when I "talk" to you - if that's okay with you.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from The Death
I would say many of use are scared to express ourselves freely as we fear judgement. Your poem captures your strong willingness to live a free form of life really well. The theme is quite appealing. Many readers would be able to relate with this. Excellent!
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I would say many of use are scared to express ourselves freely as we fear judgement. Your poem captures your strong willingness to live a free form of life really well. The theme is quite appealing. Many readers would be able to relate with this. Excellent!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from jmdg1954
Writer... I found this very interesting and something people should take to heart as they begin their journey in writing. Whether it be for fun or profit, your words have a value of credence.
Nicely done, John
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Writer... I found this very interesting and something people should take to heart as they begin their journey in writing. Whether it be for fun or profit, your words have a value of credence.
Nicely done, John
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Yuna Akil
Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem!
I am a person who's extremely self-aware and am continuously thinking about things. I think all writers are.
Your motivation to speak truthfully to yourself and converse with yourself about yourself is a trait that will lead you long ways! I'm sure it already has.
You've created a beautiful poem that is easy to read and very satisfying.
Thank you!
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Hi there! I really enjoyed your poem!
I am a person who's extremely self-aware and am continuously thinking about things. I think all writers are.
Your motivation to speak truthfully to yourself and converse with yourself about yourself is a trait that will lead you long ways! I'm sure it already has.
You've created a beautiful poem that is easy to read and very satisfying.
Thank you!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Ben Colder
Yep, you've been looking in my personal notes to self. LOL. Sound like my outline in a daily planner. Works when writing novels too. Thanks for sharing.
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Yep, you've been looking in my personal notes to self. LOL. Sound like my outline in a daily planner. Works when writing novels too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Habib Oke
"Doing easily what others find difficult is talent, doing what impossible for talent is genius."
This is not just a letter to you but to everyone. You have taught us in this poem to be humble with the gift one has been given -- not to show oneself as above everyone. We are inspired with these crystal clear words that we should be truthful every time. I like the line that says "Never lie on priority". Alcreator, keep creating words excellently to motivate the world.
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"Doing easily what others find difficult is talent, doing what impossible for talent is genius."
This is not just a letter to you but to everyone. You have taught us in this poem to be humble with the gift one has been given -- not to show oneself as above everyone. We are inspired with these crystal clear words that we should be truthful every time. I like the line that says "Never lie on priority". Alcreator, keep creating words excellently to motivate the world.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Sanku
The message you got from God is an invaluable instruction sheet relevant for all aspiring writers.Writing for publishing and making money should not be your or any writers goal. The pen is mightier than sword ,so write with a purpose
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The message you got from God is an invaluable instruction sheet relevant for all aspiring writers.Writing for publishing and making money should not be your or any writers goal. The pen is mightier than sword ,so write with a purpose
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Elizabeth Johnson1
This is absolutely wonderful! Write just write! But do it for the right reasons and do it with passion and truth.
Writing is forever my way of getting my truth out and healing the hurts in hopes others may heal too.
Thank you so much for this!
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This is absolutely wonderful! Write just write! But do it for the right reasons and do it with passion and truth.
Writing is forever my way of getting my truth out and healing the hurts in hopes others may heal too.
Thank you so much for this!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2019
Comment from Kamisah Karim
This is a great write.Your points of how we should write in the first place. To be a good writer with the right intentions, not judgemental or for personal gains but in order to help make a change in other peoples' lives and our own too.You gave me a better perspective in my quest to be a writer. God willing.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is a great write.Your points of how we should write in the first place. To be a good writer with the right intentions, not judgemental or for personal gains but in order to help make a change in other peoples' lives and our own too.You gave me a better perspective in my quest to be a writer. God willing.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2019
