Man for God
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Note to Self?"God Helps man who lives to work for mankind
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Comment from ESOSTINE
Your poem , in my opinion was a guidance to writing what could be descried as meeting good standard to stand the test of time. Openness, truthfulness and originality among others are very important. Thanks for your thoughts. Lol!
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Your poem , in my opinion was a guidance to writing what could be descried as meeting good standard to stand the test of time. Openness, truthfulness and originality among others are very important. Thanks for your thoughts. Lol!
Comment Written 04-May-2021
Comment from TPAC
I found this an interesting read, loving the chosen line structuring, and word usage forming this creative write. A great shout out to potential writers of do's and don't as your weaponry. All stated in my given opinion.
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I found this an interesting read, loving the chosen line structuring, and word usage forming this creative write. A great shout out to potential writers of do's and don't as your weaponry. All stated in my given opinion.
Comment Written 03-May-2021
Comment from Dr. Nad
"Note to Self?" Is one man's attempt to create a manifesto to the Art of Good Writing; This is a cacophony of thoughts mixed with conviction concerning what writing is and should be. He encourages all of us to be open and write without bias or prejudice. We are urged to write for others and not for ourselves. This is a tall order but one with many wise admonitions. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above!
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"Note to Self?" Is one man's attempt to create a manifesto to the Art of Good Writing; This is a cacophony of thoughts mixed with conviction concerning what writing is and should be. He encourages all of us to be open and write without bias or prejudice. We are urged to write for others and not for ourselves. This is a tall order but one with many wise admonitions. Thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above!
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
In your author notes, you say:
"Synonyms and repetitions are intentional and necessary, you may not like but I'm helpless"
I have to admit, this is exactly what I enjoyed the most about this piece of writing--the repetitive nature of it all.
Thanks for sharing. Have a great Sunday.
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In your author notes, you say:
"Synonyms and repetitions are intentional and necessary, you may not like but I'm helpless"
I have to admit, this is exactly what I enjoyed the most about this piece of writing--the repetitive nature of it all.
Thanks for sharing. Have a great Sunday.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from MAMONIA
This write really struck me as a learning experience. I enjoyed the way you get your message across. I needed this advice for my own writings. I want to thank you for this message.
It really came across as something I will need to write better.
Thanks so much.
Marie
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This write really struck me as a learning experience. I enjoyed the way you get your message across. I needed this advice for my own writings. I want to thank you for this message.
It really came across as something I will need to write better.
Thanks so much.
Marie
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from equestrik
As a fellow writer-one who writes for many reasons and with an occasional bit of writing that is deemed exceptional, I like this though at times it seemed a bit haughty, I feel it is important to write with skill and integrity though I know I fall short.
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As a fellow writer-one who writes for many reasons and with an occasional bit of writing that is deemed exceptional, I like this though at times it seemed a bit haughty, I feel it is important to write with skill and integrity though I know I fall short.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I was fascinated and enjoyed immensely your choice of very strong verbs, adverbs and adjectives. They definitely added depth of meaning and made me slow down and ponder each individual stanza.
Question: Stanza 16 ... did you mean to say 'advice' or 'advise'?
Gale
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I was fascinated and enjoyed immensely your choice of very strong verbs, adverbs and adjectives. They definitely added depth of meaning and made me slow down and ponder each individual stanza.
Question: Stanza 16 ... did you mean to say 'advice' or 'advise'?
Gale
Comment Written 02-May-2021
Comment from Cogitator
Surely some great thoughts to adopt and execute. Once we write for the purpose of others' benefit, honesty, respect wisdom, service and many other quality traits will surface...John
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Surely some great thoughts to adopt and execute. Once we write for the purpose of others' benefit, honesty, respect wisdom, service and many other quality traits will surface...John
Comment Written 24-Apr-2021
Comment from Marigo J. Stathis
Wow...this is a very original, authentic, musical piece. I could totally see it recited out loud, while you are walking around the crowd in a room, circling the space. I could see this being recited in a church, when people listen with their eyes closed...very interesting, powerful message. How brave of you to put that out there. You're awesome. Thank you for gracing me with your message. :)
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Wow...this is a very original, authentic, musical piece. I could totally see it recited out loud, while you are walking around the crowd in a room, circling the space. I could see this being recited in a church, when people listen with their eyes closed...very interesting, powerful message. How brave of you to put that out there. You're awesome. Thank you for gracing me with your message. :)
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
Comment from beizanten
A good title and it suit the poetry. I think the opening paragraph is pretty good. The second paragraph was better. So is paragraph three and 4. overall a pretty great poetry. Great job.
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A good title and it suit the poetry. I think the opening paragraph is pretty good. The second paragraph was better. So is paragraph three and 4. overall a pretty great poetry. Great job.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2021
