Island Badges [Inside Galapagos PD]
Contest Entry: Character/Cast for Cable TV Pilot5 total reviews
Comment from writer_13
I think that you did a great job in creating all the characters for your cast. You gave them all interesting personalities and I like the plot that you wrote. I found two spelling typos...under c.(Torty Hardshell)-regards is misspelled and under f. (Hawkeye Pierce) You left the a out of Hwkeye in the character description.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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I think that you did a great job in creating all the characters for your cast. You gave them all interesting personalities and I like the plot that you wrote. I found two spelling typos...under c.(Torty Hardshell)-regards is misspelled and under f. (Hawkeye Pierce) You left the a out of Hwkeye in the character description.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the review, writer_13 -- And thanx for the quick catches! :) I had a lot of fun with this one but it always seems that no matter how many times you 'read over' these longer writes, there's always something you miss. :) Happy Holiday Season from the Galapagos Police Department! :) ;)
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Happy Holidays to you and the Galapagos PD
Comment from LynSys
Congratulations on the great amount of research that you obviously put into this. A very clever write using the names of the animals as the names of the characters to tie it all together.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Congratulations on the great amount of research that you obviously put into this. A very clever write using the names of the animals as the names of the characters to tie it all together.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the review, Lynda -- always appreciate your stopping by! :) I had a lot of fun with this one. :) Happy Holiday Season from the Galapagos Police Department! :) ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello. You have been very clever in your write and presentation of this cast of characters. That Darwin Centipede is very scary and I hope I never run across him. Good job on developing this entry for the contest.
Melissa
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Hello. You have been very clever in your write and presentation of this cast of characters. That Darwin Centipede is very scary and I hope I never run across him. Good job on developing this entry for the contest.
Melissa
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in, Melissa -- always good to hear from you, ma'am! :) :) Happy Holiday Season over there! :) ;)
Comment from AdaJulie
Wow, just wow. The creativity and attention to detail simply arrouses all faculties. Beyond engaging, beyond captivating.
This is the essence of your art in true form.
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Wow, just wow. The creativity and attention to detail simply arrouses all faculties. Beyond engaging, beyond captivating.
This is the essence of your art in true form.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Ada -- such a unique contest that I couldn't pass it up! :) :) Have a wonderful week and Happy Holiday Season! :) :)
Comment from Janilou
Captain Torty - very easy going and is always running late. Hahahahahaha
I enjoyed reading this contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
I don't know much about scripts to offer any constructive feedback but I didn't see ant spelling errors.
Quite the characters you have here
All the best,
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Captain Torty - very easy going and is always running late. Hahahahahaha
I enjoyed reading this contest entry and I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
I don't know much about scripts to offer any constructive feedback but I didn't see ant spelling errors.
Quite the characters you have here
All the best,
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the read and review, Jan -- such a unique contest that I couldn't pass it up! :) :) Have a wonderful week and Happy Holiday Season! :) :)
