Christmas Reminders from Lil' Hands
Just hold one in your hand and remember...13 total reviews
Comment from Lady Jane
What a unique penning, writer. It is crafted with such poise and grace. Those timeless ornaments, made with love, stand as testimony of an innocent love and unconditional faith bound by life's littles. We could learn a lot from these cherished treasures.
The metaphor within this write is balanced and delicate, but brims with the spirit of the holiday season.
The language is solid, the flow is smooth, and the presentation was spot on. Well done, writer. I wish you luck in the contest. This one shall surely fare well.
Janelle
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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What a unique penning, writer. It is crafted with such poise and grace. Those timeless ornaments, made with love, stand as testimony of an innocent love and unconditional faith bound by life's littles. We could learn a lot from these cherished treasures.
The metaphor within this write is balanced and delicate, but brims with the spirit of the holiday season.
The language is solid, the flow is smooth, and the presentation was spot on. Well done, writer. I wish you luck in the contest. This one shall surely fare well.
Janelle
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comments, Janelle -- I am so very glad you enjoyed it (free verse isn't usually my thing, so I'm holding my breath for reviews...lol)!! :) ;) May you find all the wonders of Christmas in your memory collection! :)
Comment from Janilou
A beautiful entry in the contest. I loved the way you described those treasures and their significance.
I found no errors in your work. Best of luck in the contest!
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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A beautiful entry in the contest. I loved the way you described those treasures and their significance.
I found no errors in your work. Best of luck in the contest!
Jan Anderegg
(Author of the Julu series)
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Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comments, Jan -- I am so very glad you enjoyed it!! :) ;) May you find all the wonders of Christmas in your memory collection! :)
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Absolutely terrific! There's nothing like holding on to treasures from yesteryear to bring back all the love and joy from times when our children were little. Those sweet decorations bring it all back.
"Macaroni Hope/Tongue Depressor Faith/Clip-On Clothespin Love" ... luv it!! Oh, this made me smile.
Beautiful presentation and simply a delightful read! Best wishes for the contest with this gem of a poem. I really enjoyed it!
Hugs,
Connie
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Absolutely terrific! There's nothing like holding on to treasures from yesteryear to bring back all the love and joy from times when our children were little. Those sweet decorations bring it all back.
"Macaroni Hope/Tongue Depressor Faith/Clip-On Clothespin Love" ... luv it!! Oh, this made me smile.
Beautiful presentation and simply a delightful read! Best wishes for the contest with this gem of a poem. I really enjoyed it!
Hugs,
Connie
Comment Written 16-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2018
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Wow!! :) :) ;) Thank you so very much for the wonderful comments and those beautiful stars, Connie -- you have put a smile on my face that will probably last into the week!! :) ;) May you find all the wonders of Christmas in your memory collection! :)
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