Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello gmartinez247
I like your rhyming in your enter for the rhyming contest, very good question, who will sing the a Psalm of Peace. I hope all the people on this Earth. Gert

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018

Amen,
Thank you for the review.

reply by Gert sherwood on 15-Dec-2018

You are welcome gmartinez247 Gert

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about the world and the terrible state it is in today. We should not partake in the evil of the world but keep doing good according to God's word.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review.
Blessings to you and your family.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, I love the lines " the wars within and it must cease- every day a soul is lost, there is a powerful message in here, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and feedback. God Bless you and your family.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This piece is very uplifting, but it's realistic. it doesn't
blindly claim we can have peace without trying! God tells
us in His Word how to have peace. Well done

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insight, it also is based on part of the daily struggle faced growing up in the 70's and 80's..
God Bless you and your family.

Comment from LynSys

Excellent

Who indeed will sing George, who indeed...
And as you stated, will we be able to understand them when they do sing ;o(
Good luck in the contest!
Lynda

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insight,
God Bless you and your family

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Indeed, music of today has changed, now words are unclear and the lyrics are strange, there is no psalm of peace, songs of violence and hate increasing; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thank you for the review and insight, I have been writing for many years. It seems these cyclical times we live in are allowing me to reintroduce a few of my older works.
God Bless you and your family,
Thanks again for the review.