Comment from Galactia

Exceptional

Hi
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This is a great septolet. Septolets aren't that easy to master. This is a perfect example of this form. Two seperate contrast of the 1 complete story/picture.

I liked jow you told the story of the killer in the 1st section to bottom of the poem reflecting on the buried girl he had killed.

Well done.

Great job
Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

Thank you very much, I was happy with it but the voters were not many thanks, much appreciate your enccouragement

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is such a great Septolet and contest entry! Perfect artwork to illustrate your poem. You not only followed the 'rules', but this is a very creative and thought provoking poem. 'Why' is a good question, and the perfect title for this wonderful work.
I wish you the very best in the contest!!!!

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018

Thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed and understood, ( voters not so much) but I had fun ****kahpot

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

No change in relationship, attitude and behaviour even after going to the grave, the old man still walks freely with his new friends but outside the young girl still lays alone; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This septolet, Why?, has the proper formatting and has a deeper story that isn't clear to me here. I don't know if murder is involved or what exactly is going on.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018

Thank you I understand your queries and realize I may not be on track, many thanks