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Winged Creation

septolet entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Two so-very-different birds that you have described just perfectly in their appearance and, especially, their actions -- great job in such a limited format! :) :) thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! :)

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Dear Y.M. Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This septolet, Winged, has the proper set up and presents the reader with the motions of two types of birds which are staying and going.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Earl Corp
Excellent
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Your words certainly helped me to form a picture in my mind of the sparrow and the pigeon. I haven't read any other entries but this one should do well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Dear Earl, Thank you for your comments and review. Thanks too for your good luck wishes.