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American voyage

a septolet

2 total reviews 
Comment from meeshu
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I enjoyed reading this work, you have created some great images and this is perfect in form and message, very well written..

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Thanks for the encouraging review. I am worried for America. Cheers, j
Comment from JanPerry
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Great ideas in this septolet. But it's got eight not seven lines. Just throw one word up a line.
Octo is eight I think.
A lot of thought gone into this one. Intelligent writing.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
    Oops, not quite enough thought into this one ha ha. Thanks for the encouraging review and heads up. Chewers, j