Fantasy: Made to Order
Come! Paint a fantasy with me...11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This kyrielle, Fantasy Made to Order, has the proper format and allows us to truly let it all out and wish the utmost was attainable, controllable, and real.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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This kyrielle, Fantasy Made to Order, has the proper format and allows us to truly let it all out and wish the utmost was attainable, controllable, and real.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2018
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Thanx for dropping by, Bill -- always enjoy hearing from you! :) Have a wonderful remainder of the weekend! :) ;)
Comment from lyenochka
I like the enthusiasm of your kyrielle poem. It's a great message to encourage creativity and imagination.
I was surprised at the rhyme scheme because I thought the third line had to rhyme with the fourth.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I like the enthusiasm of your kyrielle poem. It's a great message to encourage creativity and imagination.
I was surprised at the rhyme scheme because I thought the third line had to rhyme with the fourth.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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The instructions said the author could choose the rhyme-scheme....I posted mine in the author notes. :) ;) Thanx for the review, Helen! :)
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Oh! You're right! I read the instructions to the end this time. Lol! Great job!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This highly imaginative and creative kyrielle effectively uses
whimsy to remind the reader that imagination can take us
anywhere. It's the key to creativity.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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This highly imaginative and creative kyrielle effectively uses
whimsy to remind the reader that imagination can take us
anywhere. It's the key to creativity.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Janice -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written kyrielle poem about painting our own fantasy story. We can use any imaginary or real character to paint a fantasy world that will make us happy and we can tell our children to see the stars in their eyes too.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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A very well-written kyrielle poem about painting our own fantasy story. We can use any imaginary or real character to paint a fantasy world that will make us happy and we can tell our children to see the stars in their eyes too.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Sandra -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Riding high here in a fantasy world where the sun always shines and the repeated line allows the reader to dream and let their imagination roam free, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Riding high here in a fantasy world where the sun always shines and the repeated line allows the reader to dream and let their imagination roam free, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Dolly -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Michele Harber
I love the idea of painting a fantasy, and I enjoyed the images you created, particularly where you put a unicorn, a leprechaun and a pixie together in a stanza. Your rhymes work well, and you stuck to the required Kyrielle form. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I love the idea of painting a fantasy, and I enjoyed the images you created, particularly where you put a unicorn, a leprechaun and a pixie together in a stanza. Your rhymes work well, and you stuck to the required Kyrielle form. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Michele -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
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You're very welcome, and thanks for the sunshine wishes. If you can create a unicorn, a leprechaun and a pixie, why not sunshine, right? :-)
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LOL!! I'll look into it, yeah?! :)
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Works for me!
Comment from Earl Corp
I'm fast becoming a kyrielle poetry. It has rhymes, it makes sense, it invokes emotions within the reader, and it entertains. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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I'm fast becoming a kyrielle poetry. It has rhymes, it makes sense, it invokes emotions within the reader, and it entertains. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Earl -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent Kyrielle poem my friend, as a good entry in this contest I think you have a good chance. Excellent narrative and rhyming, nice flow and articulate Harlow to the work, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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This is an excellent Kyrielle poem my friend, as a good entry in this contest I think you have a good chance. Excellent narrative and rhyming, nice flow and articulate Harlow to the work, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Roy -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
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Thank you
Comment from LynSys
Excellent Kyrielle poem.
It absolutely makes the reader want to join you to Create Our Own Fantasy riding on the Unicorn ;o))
Well written, well executed!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Excellent Kyrielle poem.
It absolutely makes the reader want to join you to Create Our Own Fantasy riding on the Unicorn ;o))
Well written, well executed!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, Lynda -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Poet beckons rightly, now we too can paint our own fantasy, the air is crisp, the sun is warm, grass is green, sky is blue, calm is the norm; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Poet beckons rightly, now we too can paint our own fantasy, the air is crisp, the sun is warm, grass is green, sky is blue, calm is the norm; well said, well done. Write More Inspire More -- DR ALCREATOR
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for dropping in for the review today, DR ALCREATOR -- so appreciated! :) ;) Here's sending some fantastical sunshine your way for the weekend!! :) ;)
