A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Top Side Of The Grass."Wisdom calls Aloud.
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Comment from heavenempress
hi, splendid piece of work. you have proclaimed the word of God in a unique way to me. thanks hey! keep it up. indeed it is true following Jesus is the way to go and a thankful way since we are still here.
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hi, splendid piece of work. you have proclaimed the word of God in a unique way to me. thanks hey! keep it up. indeed it is true following Jesus is the way to go and a thankful way since we are still here.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
Comment from jmshumate
Beautifully written. A nice ryhme and flow to this all the way through, and in your words is a message of encouragement for any believer in Christ " through it all I'm still alive" it's a miracle any of us remains alive in this devil's world. And the last line "Seasons Gretting" Christ is the reason for this season my brother! Good work and thank you for sharing!
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Beautifully written. A nice ryhme and flow to this all the way through, and in your words is a message of encouragement for any believer in Christ " through it all I'm still alive" it's a miracle any of us remains alive in this devil's world. And the last line "Seasons Gretting" Christ is the reason for this season my brother! Good work and thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
Comment from Earl Corp
If I had a six star rating left this poem would have earned it. It hit all four of the four criteria I rate poetry on. It rhymes, it makes sense, it's spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader. I also love the title. Very nice job.
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If I had a six star rating left this poem would have earned it. It hit all four of the four criteria I rate poetry on. It rhymes, it makes sense, it's spiritual, and it invokes emotions within the reader. I also love the title. Very nice job.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018
Comment from Michele Harber
Reading your poem put a smile on my face. I love the happy, optimistic and uplifting attitude of your poem, and the sing-song quality just gives it that extra cheerfulness. Your rhymes also work well.
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Reading your poem put a smile on my face. I love the happy, optimistic and uplifting attitude of your poem, and the sing-song quality just gives it that extra cheerfulness. Your rhymes also work well.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2018