The Serpent Recoils
When a serpent doesn't strike.3 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an intense ongoing tale that is spotlighted here in a Flash. You have done a good job sending out a hook to all of us to find the previous entry. Very clever!
Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
This is an intense ongoing tale that is spotlighted here in a Flash. You have done a good job sending out a hook to all of us to find the previous entry. Very clever!
Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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It's a character and storyline I'm working on, and some of the writing prompts allow me to expand what I do know about him and it. I thank you so very much for the rating and the review.
Comment from Miranda Langston
this is truly an excellent flash fiction and well deserving of a six star review. this is so moving, how someone hired to kill can show the better half of himself, what most people call humanity
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
this is truly an excellent flash fiction and well deserving of a six star review. this is so moving, how someone hired to kill can show the better half of himself, what most people call humanity
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much. I am gratified by the six stars and the wonderfully kind review.
Comment from Insider98
Very good. Even a hitman doesn't cross some lines. It's a really interesting piece. I wish you good luck in the contest. Cheers!!!
Insider98
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
Very good. Even a hitman doesn't cross some lines. It's a really interesting piece. I wish you good luck in the contest. Cheers!!!
Insider98
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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Thank you! I am much encouraged by the generous and your review.