Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This was one of the most uplifting and inspiring poems I have read in awhile. I felt the 'happiness' or contentment all the way through it. You are so right about the laughter, smiles and squeals of children brightening up the whole day. Such innocence.
I love your rhyme, and I love your chosen artwork.
This was so beautifully written, flowed so well.
I wish you the very best in the contest!

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

Comment from Rickie1

Excellent

Good job. Everything you wrote makes me smile. The coffee at sunrise theme is a favorite of mine. Clouds, kids playing, all happy scenes well chosen and expressed. Good luck in the contest.

Rickie

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Way to go on developing this happy verse. I like the flow and rhyme that gives it a sing song quality. Good job on the presentation and use of a bright color.

All the best,

Melissa

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018