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Comment from nomi338
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Maybe she cared less about being found guilty, than she felt that this stain upon humankind desperately needed to be removed. Some people are so toxic that a person no longer cares about the consequences, they just have to go, by any means necessary.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
    I saw this picture and the woman?s thumb would h@ve to be quite long to be how it looked in the rendering.
Comment from Earl Corp
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The picture doesn't really match the words in the poem she is neither throttling some one or her thumb isn't very big. It made sense for a three line poem which is about all you can ask.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Take another look at that thumb, Earl. It's freakishly long. Throttlers are not constantly throttling. Sometimes they enjoy a refreshing glass of milk. Thanks for giving this a look. : )
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh dear, there is murderous intent here from a huge thumb! A scary write Bill not sure who Melissa is, but she had an axe to grind, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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LOL, she must have been very strong as well. What a fun (?) little poem, Bill, I wonder what made her mad! lol. Loved this one. Well done again. :)) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanks, Sandra.