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Comment from nomi338
Maybe she cared less about being found guilty, than she felt that this stain upon humankind desperately needed to be removed. Some people are so toxic that a person no longer cares about the consequences, they just have to go, by any means necessary.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
Maybe she cared less about being found guilty, than she felt that this stain upon humankind desperately needed to be removed. Some people are so toxic that a person no longer cares about the consequences, they just have to go, by any means necessary.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2018
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I saw this picture and the woman?s thumb would h@ve to be quite long to be how it looked in the rendering.
Comment from Earl Corp
The picture doesn't really match the words in the poem she is neither throttling some one or her thumb isn't very big. It made sense for a three line poem which is about all you can ask.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
The picture doesn't really match the words in the poem she is neither throttling some one or her thumb isn't very big. It made sense for a three line poem which is about all you can ask.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Take another look at that thumb, Earl. It's freakishly long. Throttlers are not constantly throttling. Sometimes they enjoy a refreshing glass of milk. Thanks for giving this a look. : )
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, there is murderous intent here from a huge thumb! A scary write Bill not sure who Melissa is, but she had an axe to grind, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
Oh dear, there is murderous intent here from a huge thumb! A scary write Bill not sure who Melissa is, but she had an axe to grind, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Dolly
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, she must have been very strong as well. What a fun (?) little poem, Bill, I wonder what made her mad! lol. Loved this one. Well done again. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
LOL, she must have been very strong as well. What a fun (?) little poem, Bill, I wonder what made her mad! lol. Loved this one. Well done again. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Thanks, Sandra.