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Viewing comments for Chapter 49 "Save Your Life."
Wisdom calls Aloud.
3 total reviews
Comment from
Joan E.
Many thanks for sharing your thought provoking question. I admired your focus on limitations of time and the artwork you selected to emphasis it. Best wishes with getting "it right the first time"! Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 11-Dec-2018
Comment from
Miss Sherry
Pithy and vivid. Mayhaps the answer is that the first time, we are unsure of what we are doing. Hurrying is a fiend that eats up progress. The second time we are more secure and careful. You did an admirable job with this - the hour glass with such a short piece was genius. I like this very much.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
MERRY CHRISTMAS OLDPOET: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Because most of the time, someone demands it be done again while many would have left it done 'not right'....if they can get away with it....:) ;) ;) A fun write and definitely a noteworthy one for teenagers! :) ) Thanx for sharing! :)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
MERRY CHRISTMAS Y.M. ROGER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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