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A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.

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Wisdom calls Aloud.

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Comment from Joan E.
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Many thanks for sharing your thought provoking question. I admired your focus on limitations of time and the artwork you selected to emphasis it. Best wishes with getting "it right the first time"! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018

Comment from Miss Sherry
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Pithy and vivid. Mayhaps the answer is that the first time, we are unsure of what we are doing. Hurrying is a fiend that eats up progress. The second time we are more secure and careful. You did an admirable job with this - the hour glass with such a short piece was genius. I like this very much.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    MERRY CHRISTMAS OLDPOET: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Because most of the time, someone demands it be done again while many would have left it done 'not right'....if they can get away with it....:) ;) ;) A fun write and definitely a noteworthy one for teenagers! :) ) Thanx for sharing! :)

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    MERRY CHRISTMAS Y.M. ROGER: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. Cordially: rhonnie69.