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Do the Crime, Do the Time

A Witty Animal 5-7-5

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Comment from WryWriter
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This is darling and funny! Good 5-7-5 poem with animal theme. Love the emphasis on the last line with the "socked." Precious artwork fits this poetic work beautifully. Catcalls this a winner.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
    Thank you so much WryWriter, for dropping by today -- please know that you're welcome to drop in anytime! :) ;) Have a delightful week ahead! :) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this is hilarious! So inventive and with much seasonal fun and those words are clever and made me smile, I wish you luck with the contest, you amused and touched my heart with your Tanka, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, Dolly -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
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This one wins the cute award. Your words are awesome as well though. You give us two play on words--"catcalls," my favorite and "socked" the cute one. As a cat owner, I can just hear those catcalls. They certainly can be loud enough to disrupt. As to the socked, I am glad that they were only stuck in stockings.
This entry should do well.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, MQ -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)
reply by Debbie Pope on 10-Dec-2018
    I think you will win, Ms. Yvette. I have one entered as well, but yours is more captivating. I didn't say it in my review, but I love your title.
    I love our secret communications. I always try to guess which post is yours. Seriously, I do. Can you guess which post is mine in this contest? Dare you. I'll give you a hint--I went for clever, something that I know better than.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Were you the goatee? ... I'm really bad at guessing in these .... I do better with more style to go on... :( :( Sorry...
reply by Debbie Pope on 10-Dec-2018
    Nope, you lose. It would have been extraordinary if you had guessed it. Nothing special about my style that would have helped you. I see you are almost winning. Only one down.
Comment from Sugarray77
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This is a very good entry for the Witty Animal contest. I love the play on words and the fantastic artwork you chose to showcase it. Good job and good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, Melissa -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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I'm a little slow, but once I got this, I could not stop laughing. This is a great entry in the contest! Love the illustration. 'catcalls for mistress' was my favorite verse. Very creative. I wish you the very best in the contest!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, Gale -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)
Comment from Carolyn Reaves
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Cute illustration for your poem. It looks so festive. You have followed the guidelines very well in writing this witty, animal 5-7-5 poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, Carolyn -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
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This is funny, fun, and very cute. Your play on words is superb and very well executed. The artwork is precious and compliments your work well. I like this! Well done!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
    Thanx so much, Jeffrey -- so glad the little ones put a smile on your face! ;) ;) Happy Holidays! :)