Daylight & Dog
For my dog Luna who was always afraid of the dark.27 total reviews
Comment from victor 66
I grew up and during most of my adult life, I had a dog or dogs. Many times I preferred their company to that of humans. Dogs never have a bad thing to say to you. This is a very nice tribute to your friend who has passed. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
I grew up and during most of my adult life, I had a dog or dogs. Many times I preferred their company to that of humans. Dogs never have a bad thing to say to you. This is a very nice tribute to your friend who has passed. Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind review. I feel the same way at times. My old girl was a very important part of my life. I appreciate your words of kindness.
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You are most welcome, Charlene.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-w-w-wwwww... I am truly sorry for your loss, Charlene.
Our dogs are not just some animal we own. They are as beloved a member of our family as anyone.
I have a seventeen-year-old Chihuahua named Gidget. She is, without a doubt, my very best friend.
I enjoy spending time with Gidget more than I do most humans I know.
You know, there's a reason that D-O-G spells G-O-D in reverse.
And remember...All dogs go to heaven.
You have my deepest sympathies.
Enjoy this short video from my friend, Wendy Francisco.
Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
A-w-w-wwwww... I am truly sorry for your loss, Charlene.
Our dogs are not just some animal we own. They are as beloved a member of our family as anyone.
I have a seventeen-year-old Chihuahua named Gidget. She is, without a doubt, my very best friend.
I enjoy spending time with Gidget more than I do most humans I know.
You know, there's a reason that D-O-G spells G-O-D in reverse.
And remember...All dogs go to heaven.
You have my deepest sympathies.
Enjoy this short video from my friend, Wendy Francisco.
Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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That was absolutely beautiful and thank you Dean! What a wonderful video and I SO appreciate you taking the time to share it with me. I'm still "smarting" from sending my girl into the darkness she hated but it's getting better thanks to people who care like yourself.
Comment from zlp22
So sorry on the passing of your dog. Very good poem and word flow. Interesting read, Dogs give more love than any others. Cat lovers may not agree but dogs simply know what your mood is.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
So sorry on the passing of your dog. Very good poem and word flow. Interesting read, Dogs give more love than any others. Cat lovers may not agree but dogs simply know what your mood is.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for the kind review. I am basically a dog person but have been adopted by two cats. Thank you again.
Comment from Galactia
Hi
Excellent written poem of the dog and it's sunshine companion. I really liked the metaphors within your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Great job, well enjoyed.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
Hi
Excellent written poem of the dog and it's sunshine companion. I really liked the metaphors within your poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Great job, well enjoyed.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you SO much for your very nice review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Insider98
A very lovely tribute to your dog. I love the personification of daylight with her blue gown. Great use of the abab rhyme scheme. An amazing entry! Good luck!
Insider98
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
A very lovely tribute to your dog. I love the personification of daylight with her blue gown. Great use of the abab rhyme scheme. An amazing entry! Good luck!
Insider98
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind review. I appreciate it a great deal.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written and composed tribute to your little who has gone before you to prepare a playing field for you both. Just love thisceloquently written rhyming poem that articulte ssk well your dearl dog. Written in abab smooth flowing rhyme and sweetly scribed stanzas,, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
A beautifully written and composed tribute to your little who has gone before you to prepare a playing field for you both. Just love thisceloquently written rhyming poem that articulte ssk well your dearl dog. Written in abab smooth flowing rhyme and sweetly scribed stanzas,, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you Roy so much for your kind review. It's very appreciated.
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Most welcome
Comment from susand3022
Hi Charlene, What a cute poem about a dog who doesn't like the dark. You found a new way to describe the sky as wearing a blue dress, I found that to be very clever. Well done.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
Hi Charlene, What a cute poem about a dog who doesn't like the dark. You found a new way to describe the sky as wearing a blue dress, I found that to be very clever. Well done.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you SO much for your kind review. It's appreciated a great deal.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a lovely poem full of personification of the natural elements. I have only recently adopted a dog and we have such joy together but i know from bitter experience that eventually one has to pay for that joy, the toll exacted by the rainbow bridge keeper.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
This is a lovely poem full of personification of the natural elements. I have only recently adopted a dog and we have such joy together but i know from bitter experience that eventually one has to pay for that joy, the toll exacted by the rainbow bridge keeper.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for your very nice review and, yes we know going in there will be a price to pay. Enjoy your furbaby for as long as the "Keeper" allows.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a heartwarming tribute to your little friend, Your words are sweet, serene and loving, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
This is a heartwarming tribute to your little friend, Your words are sweet, serene and loving, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Dear Dolly, thank you so much for your review. I so appreciate your kind words.
Comment from LynSys
Very sweet Charlene...one of my dogs is terrified of any kind of strange light, flash light, lightning, a candle, she's off under the bed. As a rescue, who knows what all that means!
Good luck in the contest ;o)
Lynda
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
Very sweet Charlene...one of my dogs is terrified of any kind of strange light, flash light, lightning, a candle, she's off under the bed. As a rescue, who knows what all that means!
Good luck in the contest ;o)
Lynda
Comment Written 12-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2018
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Thank you Lyn for your kind words and good review. It's very much appreciated.
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You're most welcome ;o)