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Family Ties Volume two.

Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "What's The Big Idea?"
Second book Of Series.

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Okay rhonnie69
you got my attention of why does Santa needs
a pair of asbestos pants so he won't scourge his
derriere when goes down the hot chimney
Now how do I get your attention to read my writings (smiles) Gert


 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about buying gifts for Santa Claus and there is a big idea of doing so as the father proposes his son; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018

Comment from His Grayness
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Very delightful, clever, cute, and creating a big smile indeed! I enjoyed this very much and have no suggestions to improve upon it in any way! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018