Monkey Play
Monkeys will be monkeys tamed or not.5 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
Such monkey dribble is this! How dare this monkey! Do tell, did the monkey wear the dentures? This dribble made me laugh. I can picture this monkey business happening. Great job!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Such monkey dribble is this! How dare this monkey! Do tell, did the monkey wear the dentures? This dribble made me laugh. I can picture this monkey business happening. Great job!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
Nice to meet you WryWriter and thank you for the kind review!
Happy my short flash essay made you laugh.. It was a last minute entry.
Initially I did want to title it "Monkey Business" .(biggrin)
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I think the title fits it to a T and I think you have a winner there.
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Thank you WryWriter and sorry for the typos .
which I duly corrected.
Hope you have a lovely Sunday!
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You have a great Sunday, too!
Comment from BOO ghost
This looks fabulous!
This is amusing.
The monkey has a toy trinket now.
I betcha he don't want to relinquish it.
Maybe trade a banana for grannies dentures.
I got a cat that collects items and stashes them under a rug for safekeeping.
BOO!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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This looks fabulous!
This is amusing.
The monkey has a toy trinket now.
I betcha he don't want to relinquish it.
Maybe trade a banana for grannies dentures.
I got a cat that collects items and stashes them under a rug for safekeeping.
BOO!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Pets have distinct personalities (and habits ) like people..monkeys are clearly far more intelligent than a cat or dog.. The fact these teeth ️came out fascinated her.
The little rascal knew we were in panic mode and was enjoying ever minute...grandma was on a 10 day visit we just couldn't afford they got broken.. With the help of a ladder dentures were recuperated .. Living with a ( squirrel) monkey for nearly 11years was a roller coaster experience.
Thank you so much for the shiny six star vote and the kind review!
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You were not monkeying around with this true story
Comment from Kerry Foley
lol, Oh My God! This is hilarious. I wish I had a six left for you. You have a great opening line" "The theft came like lightning on a Summer day." This is an adorable little piece of flash fiction, with a beginning middle and ending. Great job, I love it!
Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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lol, Oh My God! This is hilarious. I wish I had a six left for you. You have a great opening line" "The theft came like lightning on a Summer day." This is an adorable little piece of flash fiction, with a beginning middle and ending. Great job, I love it!
Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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A last minute choice to enter ..glad it made you laugh.. Everyone would have been devastated had the denture been broken , specially grandma but with the help of a ladder and a pinch of luck they were recuperated .
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lol, that's funny. You're very welcome. Congratulations again!
Comment from jmshumate
This is a funny dribble of fiction. I can picture this monkey jumping from banastervto chandelier with granny's dentures. How is the family going to get them back? I imagine they will have to wait until he is done playing! Good job!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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This is a funny dribble of fiction. I can picture this monkey jumping from banastervto chandelier with granny's dentures. How is the family going to get them back? I imagine they will have to wait until he is done playing! Good job!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Happy my 50 word essay made you laugh and wonder how the situation ended ..
Maybe with the help of a ladder the matter was resolved , who knows.(biggrin)
Comment from Jan Anderegg
A very cute flash fiction story. I could just see this happening. LOL
No errors noted in your work. Excellent piece. I enjoyed reading this.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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A very cute flash fiction story. I could just see this happening. LOL
No errors noted in your work. Excellent piece. I enjoyed reading this.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2018
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Nice to meet you Janilou!
I'm glad my short flash made your imagination run .
Thank you for the positive review!