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Waking to the Dream

50 word story

56 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
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What a fun foray into soo many people's fantasy! You captured all the inner thoughts and excitement just right. This was very fun to read, Michael.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Ulla
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Michael, what great piece to leave the stage and now you're ready for the big one with all your fans queuing. You went out with a laugh and you will be sorely missed. RIP. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from LIJ Red
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Here's to starring in that blockbuster on the other shore where tickets are free and so is the popcorn. An excellent fifty word curtain call, as well. Live again in peace.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Dorothy Farrell
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Well Mikey, I know people die, but opening up FS this morning and seeing that single candle burning and news of your death stunned me. So very sad - a good 50 words to go out on and I hope you enjoy fame in the great unknown as you did here. RIP. Dorothy x

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from rama devi
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Ah, dear Micheal, you had a prime seat in your own life-movie, and I am sure all the seeds of loving kindness you planted, and the humor, creativity and inspirational encouragement you gave to our Fanstory family has fashioned potent grace to lift your wings as you fly to the next horizon, laced with loving light. Your selfless generosity always inspired me. Your humor tickled me. I enjoyed watching your writing voice blossom and mature.

The title of this post is so apt...as you've now awakened from the Earthly dreamed and soared to new heights...truly a star.

This post managed to make me smile and chuckle, even in the midst of sadness to hear you passed.

Bless you. RIP.

Love,
rd

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Ben Colder
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What an ambition. Must say to people that sleep in cars and on streets who seek to find a nugget of something new. "Go for it!" Best to you in the contest. I find nothing wrong

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from apky
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A great dribble, Michael, and all about your glorious self. You do that blockbuster and I'll be right there in the line zigzagging around the block.

Fantastic with words, you are.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Dan Diego
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For this one, I read, I laughed, and I cried. I even spit my coffee all over my keyboard. Speaks to the vanity in all of us. But mostly I cried. Gonna' miss you.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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You were always such a fun person, Mikey, everyone loved you. This is a great dribble fiction to go out on, you, the superstar! I loved that you had to sleep overnight to get a good seat to watch yourself, LOL, classic, my friend. Sleep tight my friend, see you one day soon. xxx

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019

Comment from Scarbrems
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How strange it seems to be reading this now. You were certainly the star of FanStory, that's for sure. In the blockbuster they make of this site, you'll be the lead. Dream on, dreamer

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2019