Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Cookiestorm", is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2018

Comment from patsolstad

Excellent

This is perfectly lovely. I like the 'child voice' in the first line's fun words, as well as in the second line's 'tummy.' The graphic you chose is so apropos: I can almost smell the cookies and feel their fresh-out-of-the-oven warmth. Excellent work.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I really like the way you describe those chocolate chip cookies. The accompanying artwork doesn't make it any easier. You make me desire some cookies and milk. Great job Miranda and well done!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from rhonnie69

Excellent

MERRY CHRISTMAS MIRANDA: You have handled this cookie writing prompt deliciously. I can taste your words as well as I can taste your cookies. I like your posting here because I like chocolate chip cookies...and your posting here represents them in a tasty way. Thank you for sharing your chocolate chip cookies, Miranda. Remember to sit some of them out for Santa to enjoy. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi

My favourite cookies, coles chock chip cookies. Very descriptive. My daughter's birthday Fecember 4th, i did not know it was national cookie day. Which country?


Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I am a cookie fanatic so your words are awesome! You have created a wonderful poem for National Cookie Day, a day I was unaware of. Your poem is happy and makes the reader eager for some chocolate chip cookies.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from Hugh McDowell

Excellent

Cookies speak an international language! A very simple but effective poem that made me hungry for chocolate chip cookies. Loved the adjectives in the first. A perfect description of cookies just out of the oven! Excellent. Hugh

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from A. Troutman

Excellent

Okay, this poem made me really want a cookie. Ooey and gooey is the BEST, especially for chocolate chip cookies (my personal favorite)! This was really well thought out, and it captured a feeling with only 20 syllables. Amazing!

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Meets the 20 syllables requirement. Chocolate chip cookies are some of the best. Enjoyed this creatively written poem. Should make a good entry for this contest.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Well the chocolate chip cookies take the cake, yes? This entry has a jaunty cadence and all the yummy things that make cookies so scrumptious.

Great job and twenty syllables too so much luck to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2018