Holiday Anticipation
20-syllable 'Cookie' Poem Entry9 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
I did enjoy your 'le' rhyme endings.
And 'craft' with 'cookie' is excellent too!
'Shaping a smile' reminds me of when my Mom decorated her cookies. Thanks for those memories.
BTW ... I liked eating the raw cookie or cake batter from the beaters or with a spatula - apparently it never made me sick and it was so sweet and delish (-;
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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I did enjoy your 'le' rhyme endings.
And 'craft' with 'cookie' is excellent too!
'Shaping a smile' reminds me of when my Mom decorated her cookies. Thanks for those memories.
BTW ... I liked eating the raw cookie or cake batter from the beaters or with a spatula - apparently it never made me sick and it was so sweet and delish (-;
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Mark -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a creative and fun cookie poem. Brings the joy of the season to the reader! And memories! Oh my memories of the cookies my mother could create at Christmas! She loved the old German recipes. She'd begin baking in November; I can still remember how the aroma of cookies filled our home...Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a creative and fun cookie poem. Brings the joy of the season to the reader! And memories! Oh my memories of the cookies my mother could create at Christmas! She loved the old German recipes. She'd begin baking in November; I can still remember how the aroma of cookies filled our home...Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, diane -- this mystery writer greatly appreciates it! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I really, really like this!
You chose the perfect artwork.
I think you also chose the perfect background color.
Font: I like how you chose the bigger font size; I like the font color.
I like the indented, staircase look of the lines of your poem.
I especially love the poem ... every word. Cookies are made for love and the lifting of spirits.
An excellent contest entry! I wish you the very best :)
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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I really, really like this!
You chose the perfect artwork.
I think you also chose the perfect background color.
Font: I like how you chose the bigger font size; I like the font color.
I like the indented, staircase look of the lines of your poem.
I especially love the poem ... every word. Cookies are made for love and the lifting of spirits.
An excellent contest entry! I wish you the very best :)
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Gale -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the anticipation to have that Christmas cookies ready to eat. All the work is done, it take hours in front of the stove, we eat it up in a few minutes.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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A very well-written poem about the anticipation to have that Christmas cookies ready to eat. All the work is done, it take hours in front of the stove, we eat it up in a few minutes.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Sandra -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about food treats, make and prepare cookies and enjoy the National Cookie Day today and made the celebration memorable smiling and enjoying food; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This speaks about food treats, make and prepare cookies and enjoy the National Cookie Day today and made the celebration memorable smiling and enjoying food; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, DR ALCREATOR -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Kelly Hanna
This is a creative piece do the contest! I enjoyed the little rhyme tossed in at the end. It helped the poem feel complete. 20 syllable's exactly is a hard task, but you did well. It made sense and sounded like a happy number. Great job and good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This is a creative piece do the contest! I enjoyed the little rhyme tossed in at the end. It helped the poem feel complete. 20 syllable's exactly is a hard task, but you did well. It made sense and sounded like a happy number. Great job and good luck!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Kelly -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Anntonette
I am so voting on this entry. I like the indentation in the beginning of each line, it shows you having a creative style of writing and organization. The color of the background reminds me of cookie dough :) Well done.
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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I am so voting on this entry. I like the indentation in the beginning of each line, it shows you having a creative style of writing and organization. The color of the background reminds me of cookie dough :) Well done.
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Anntonette, and a special thanx for those wonderful stars -- so glad my poem put a smile on your face and your heart! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from LIJ Red
I think I'll shoot my TV if it keeps showing that gingerbread man playing Rock/Paper/scissors... looks like twenty syllables about cookies to me. Excellent.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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I think I'll shoot my TV if it keeps showing that gingerbread man playing Rock/Paper/scissors... looks like twenty syllables about cookies to me. Excellent.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, LlJ -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
National Cookie Day! And to think I just found out a few
hours ago! Your entry is delightful; I like the rhyme and
meter--and the indication that another cookie will be needed later.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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National Cookie Day! And to think I just found out a few
hours ago! Your entry is delightful; I like the rhyme and
meter--and the indication that another cookie will be needed later.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping by for the r&r today, Janice -- much appreciated! :) :) Be sure to take time mixing up some cookie fun of your own today -- even if that is simply to enjoy a few of your favorites! :) :)
