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Melting Moments

Cookie entry 20 syllables

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Comment from rspoet
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You've written an excellent "Cookie" poem and entry for the contest
capturing the wonderful allure of the fresh baked cookies or bickies
Excellent rhymes set of three rhymes
and colorful presentation to match your picture
Well done
Good luck in the contest
Robert

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Hi Robert, Thanks for having morning tea with me Yumm and more tomorrow LOL Many Cheers for your good luck
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a simple and fun write and I like the presentation and you made my mouth water, good luck with he contest, it is a fattening write, love, Dolly x

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2018


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
    Hi Dolly, Thanks for having a cookie with me I am glad you enjoyed the crunch Cheers for your good luck