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Comment from Marc Grimaldi
The roller coaster of love. We all have our flaws and they will come out, and unfortunately, sometimes we hurt the people we love the most, because of them. This was well written with a smooth flow. Keep up the good writing!
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The roller coaster of love. We all have our flaws and they will come out, and unfortunately, sometimes we hurt the people we love the most, because of them. This was well written with a smooth flow. Keep up the good writing!
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
Comment from kiwijenny
Daze Of Whine And Roses...I think you needed to say Wine...though that's the only wine I know about ..whine. Lol
Another door opens...Another door closes.
Oh. The daze of wine and roses."...
God bless
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Daze Of Whine And Roses...I think you needed to say Wine...though that's the only wine I know about ..whine. Lol
Another door opens...Another door closes.
Oh. The daze of wine and roses."...
God bless
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019
Comment from Teresa Alford
I think your poem is well-written. It had a good flow and is easy for the reader to follow along and stay connect with the story of the poem. Good job. Keep writing. TA ";-)
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I think your poem is well-written. It had a good flow and is easy for the reader to follow along and stay connect with the story of the poem. Good job. Keep writing. TA ";-)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2019