Mother's Life
musings on mommyish chores ... a free verse58 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
A mother has the strength of a superwoman fulfilling the needs of her family. There of stories many episodes proving the above statement. This is very well written.
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A mother has the strength of a superwoman fulfilling the needs of her family. There of stories many episodes proving the above statement. This is very well written.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from kiwisteveh
I have to chuckle at the Mom in your picture who still manages to look well-dressed and well-groomed despite her multifarious tasks!
Yes, it's true what you write, although in this day and age, with many working mothers, many of the jobs fall to the aDad as well.
Nice.
Steve
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I have to chuckle at the Mom in your picture who still manages to look well-dressed and well-groomed despite her multifarious tasks!
Yes, it's true what you write, although in this day and age, with many working mothers, many of the jobs fall to the aDad as well.
Nice.
Steve
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from Rickie1
Nassus
Mothers are the CEO & COO of the family. They do everything, they just don'tget the same executive pay. They do get the satisfaction of doing the job right something many executives never do. A mother is the core of society, no has a more important role. Well written. Be proud.
Rickie
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Nassus
Mothers are the CEO & COO of the family. They do everything, they just don'tget the same executive pay. They do get the satisfaction of doing the job right something many executives never do. A mother is the core of society, no has a more important role. Well written. Be proud.
Rickie
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this one!! So apt and well described. I like your list of all sorts of thankless jobs that go with the term.. mother, but she doesn't mind. She is in it for love. Great presentation with colorful art. Well done.
Melissa
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I love this one!! So apt and well described. I like your list of all sorts of thankless jobs that go with the term.. mother, but she doesn't mind. She is in it for love. Great presentation with colorful art. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from l.raven
Hi Susan, been there...done it all...LOL...
and then they leave home...and you keep doing it out of routine...LOL...I love your fun poem sweet girl...and love this picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi Susan, been there...done it all...LOL...
and then they leave home...and you keep doing it out of routine...LOL...I love your fun poem sweet girl...and love this picture...very nicely written my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from Galactia
Hi lol, what a great little poem. Here I have writers block and you whip up a poem about mothers and our endless household chores.
Great job
Regards
Tia
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Hi lol, what a great little poem. Here I have writers block and you whip up a poem about mothers and our endless household chores.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from Connie Frazier
Love it! I like how it starts with explaining that a mother is a collection. Mother may be a singular noun, but is more accurately a plural entity. I agree with your analysis. The poem reads easily and is a very apt definition of being a mom. Well done.
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Love it! I like how it starts with explaining that a mother is a collection. Mother may be a singular noun, but is more accurately a plural entity. I agree with your analysis. The poem reads easily and is a very apt definition of being a mom. Well done.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from Donka Kristeva
It's fun but it sounds also as facts. A mother can be anything where she is needed. I enjoyed the simple and amusing words and the light hearted mood.
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It's fun but it sounds also as facts. A mother can be anything where she is needed. I enjoyed the simple and amusing words and the light hearted mood.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from meeshu
This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, Susan. Moms all over the world are going to love this one. it is clever and very accurate..
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This is a pleasure to read. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful. Very well penned, Susan. Moms all over the world are going to love this one. it is clever and very accurate..
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, humorous, and
creative. The reader thought all things listed are a part of motherhood!
The poem made me smile. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.
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Excellent Poem! The author's words are descriptive, humorous, and
creative. The reader thought all things listed are a part of motherhood!
The poem made me smile. The artwork is perfect and compliments this
poem well.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2018
