Mother's Life
musings on mommyish chores ... a free verse58 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
That's barely the tip of the iceberg. This poem should have been in a contest. They have a million of them on here. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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That's barely the tip of the iceberg. This poem should have been in a contest. They have a million of them on here. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot mike for the exceptional six-star review. You made my day. God bless you.
Comment from BOO ghost
An All Time Best. Fabulous! I r ead the author footnotes. A 24/7 hotline. I can relate.
Yep. A mother's work is never done. The father watches football and NASCAR from his recliner as mon cooks. He works to escape the kids. Lol!
Been there, done that! Being a father with a tribe of youngins.
Red is fitting.
Nice free verse!
BOOtastic!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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An All Time Best. Fabulous! I r ead the author footnotes. A 24/7 hotline. I can relate.
Yep. A mother's work is never done. The father watches football and NASCAR from his recliner as mon cooks. He works to escape the kids. Lol!
Been there, done that! Being a father with a tribe of youngins.
Red is fitting.
Nice free verse!
BOOtastic!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks for appreciating this humble poem. Thank you for the five stars. God bless. Susan
Comment from Ricky1024
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Mommishnish quite inciteful.
Sometines nightmarishly un rightful.
Mommies love they children feed, seed, indeed.
Protect and subject.
Educate yourself in your "Mommiosity?"
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
Mommishnish quite inciteful.
Sometines nightmarishly un rightful.
Mommies love they children feed, seed, indeed.
Protect and subject.
Educate yourself in your "Mommiosity?"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks, Doctor Ricky, for the five stars. God bless you more.
Comment from John Ciarmello
Hi, Susan, and thank you for your review of "A Baby Soldier Memoir" I appreciate your reading and following. Your work, including this one, shows your passion for the craft and your love for words, both of which I look for in a writer. I love your work! Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Hi, Susan, and thank you for your review of "A Baby Soldier Memoir" I appreciate your reading and following. Your work, including this one, shows your passion for the craft and your love for words, both of which I look for in a writer. I love your work! Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot JohnC for dropping by and the five stars too. God bless you more.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
That seems like a poet sitting on a sunny beach and missing his/ her mother, and suddenly has an inspiration on the greatest role in the world. Everything said here is so true and it's a vivid portrait of a wonderful character we often take for granted.
Great job!
Mario
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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That seems like a poet sitting on a sunny beach and missing his/ her mother, and suddenly has an inspiration on the greatest role in the world. Everything said here is so true and it's a vivid portrait of a wonderful character we often take for granted.
Great job!
Mario
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot Mario for the positive review and the five stars too. God bless you more.
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
Heres to Moms everywhere who wear many hats as you so humorously point out. Humor yes but there is so much truth in your poem. We do it all so effortlessly.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Heres to Moms everywhere who wear many hats as you so humorously point out. Humor yes but there is so much truth in your poem. We do it all so effortlessly.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2022
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Thanks a lot for appreciating this poem and thanks too for the five stars. God bless you more.
Comment from Sefiros
A mother does so many things it's easy to define her through her tasks. This was one of the most creative pieces I've ever come across on FanStory. You should be proud of this piece. Good luck with the future.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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A mother does so many things it's easy to define her through her tasks. This was one of the most creative pieces I've ever come across on FanStory. You should be proud of this piece. Good luck with the future.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2018
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Oh my goodness you made my day my friend. I am so deeply humbled that you considered this piece most creative. Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars. God bless. Susan
Comment from kidz
Great. You have said well about mother's life. Mother is a great benefactor of our life. You make it brief, simple but full of meanings. Keep up writings
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Great. You have said well about mother's life. Mother is a great benefactor of our life. You make it brief, simple but full of meanings. Keep up writings
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a realistic view of the role of motherhood, written in easy and fluid free verse - a winning write that ended much too soon - this is one that could continue indefinitely, or at least become more historic - I really liked it...
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In my opinion, a realistic view of the role of motherhood, written in easy and fluid free verse - a winning write that ended much too soon - this is one that could continue indefinitely, or at least become more historic - I really liked it...
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It looks like you have your work cut out for you. It reminds me of the nurses I was on an elevator with. They were complaining about their workload and one of them said,
"Men work from dawn till setting sun
But women's work is never done."
I said, "That's because of poor organization skills."
I narrowly escaped with my life.
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It looks like you have your work cut out for you. It reminds me of the nurses I was on an elevator with. They were complaining about their workload and one of them said,
"Men work from dawn till setting sun
But women's work is never done."
I said, "That's because of poor organization skills."
I narrowly escaped with my life.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
