Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This was adorably cute! I loved it! Your little muse just up and left you to fall peacefully asleep in the magical forest of your imagination.
Beautifully illustrated.
Like your color choice for the background to your poem.
I like the punctuation.
This is a great contest entry, and I wish you the very best!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. When I do get writer's block, I take a walk through the woods then have to race back to capture all my new ideas before I forget. haha. I also love this cute little fairy, just chillin'. Cheers, j

Comment from sueseagull

Excellent

This is just wonderful! It is amazing to me that with so few words you were able to not only write a great poem and as a bonus it rhymes! Terrific word choices and the picture makes the message complete. Thanks for this fun read! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018

Thanks for the thoughtful review. I wanted to use that artwork for awhile. Cheers, j

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

Hi

This is a pleasure to wake up and read. What a stunning little poem this is from the words to the presentation. I think you have fulfilled this prompt well on writers block. I have been suffering from that in the past several days.

Great job and Good luck in the contest.

Regards
Tia

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018

Thanks for the kind review. I go for a walk in the woods when I feel uninspired. I don't really have a fairy muse ha ha.. I wish you peace, love and clarity.....and no block! Cheers, j

Comment from humpwhistle

Excellent

Clever use of rhyme, suggesting no true writer's block.
I must admit I cringe when writer's blame their lack of productivity on reluctant mythological fairies. Does anyone really believe that crap?
Sorry. 'Muses' set me off.

Best off luck.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018

Thanks for the review Lee. Actually, I am rarely stumped, as ideas (years old) float around my brain kinda constant. When I do not feel inspired, I find a walk in the woods is a two-fer. A little exercise and refreshed ideas to share. Cheers, j

Comment from Michele Harber

Excellent

This is a charming poem, and a very fitting entry in the Writer's Block 5-7-5 contest. I like that you made all three lines rhyme, and the words you chose to do so. The image accompanying it certainly makes your point about the errant muse, and does so in a very cute way. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. Actually, I just wanted to use the artwork, haha. Cheers, j have a great week end.

reply by Michele Harber on 01-Dec-2018

At least you answered the age old question, "Which came first, the chicken or the egg?" or, in this case, "the poem or the image?" You have a great weekend as well.