Comment from Rene Ravensdale

Excellent

I like the rhyme in this,
and the way it talks about the possibility of miracles, as long as you believe enough.
I'm glad that a recovery was achieved in the end,
and yeah, never forgotten!
keep on the good writing!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

My true life experience
Thank you 🙏🏽

Comment from Lady Jane

Excellent

Again, as if I was to start a New. (anew)

My Dieabetic Kidneys failed and my BP sailed, -edit suggestion
My diabetic kidneys failed and my BP sailed

Left hand amputated, right fingers went(,) too,- edit suggestion

Interesting take on the prompt, dear writer. Is this biographical? If so, how very powerfully driven this piece is. I made some edit suggestions, but this poem reads very well of a life saved by HE who grants us breath... Yes, it is HIS grace that sets us free. Good luck in the contest.
Janelle

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you,
God Bless you!

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

This is a good to read, although not a very uplifting topic. Your writing is smooth and the language is colorful, but I hope it's not true..

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018

Thank you,
God Bless you!