A Word To The Wise Is Sufficient.
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Who Told The First Lie."Wisdom calls Aloud.
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Comment from Liz O'Neill
This could also serve as a good topic for those philosophical and discussion submissions. You surely draw the reader in to serious contemplate such a question. Some have never had cause to even begin to think in these terms. But now the reader is invited to pause, cease all frenetic activity and do some hard pondering what this question really means. It is much deeper than research the name or identity of who may have said that, but to face or own mortality. Well versed.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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This could also serve as a good topic for those philosophical and discussion submissions. You surely draw the reader in to serious contemplate such a question. Some have never had cause to even begin to think in these terms. But now the reader is invited to pause, cease all frenetic activity and do some hard pondering what this question really means. It is much deeper than research the name or identity of who may have said that, but to face or own mortality. Well versed.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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HELLO LIZ O'NEILL: Thank you for reading and complementing on my work here. You are appreciated. My purpose for writing it is that it would do exactly what you've said that it does. I want our people who don't know, to know exactly who started all the lies that exist in our lives today. I'm hoping that this will prompt them to open their Holy Bibles to GENESIS chapter 3...and see for themselves. Perhaps then they will desire to view the entire book of, GENESIS...and then continue reading throughout the book of, REVELATION...which means something important that have been brought to their attention, God. Bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mark D. R.
Vivid image combined with the brief text makes this a winner. The last word rhymes work A-OK.
I only question why you used caps for your last line. Possibly, you can add an author's note to explain your thinking about it. I am unclear as to its significance.
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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Vivid image combined with the brief text makes this a winner. The last word rhymes work A-OK.
I only question why you used caps for your last line. Possibly, you can add an author's note to explain your thinking about it. I am unclear as to its significance.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
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HELLO MARK: Thank you for viewing and complementing my work here. You are appreciated. It is you who are the winner here...because you are clever enough to be able to relate to where I am coming from...and where I am going with this. I've used capital letters for my last line...and here is the reason why. Because these are the words of the very first lie. I wanted to put, EMPHASIS, on these words. And while the last word rhymes work A-OK...they express exactly what I am trying to say. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.