Of Sea, Earth and Sky
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Of Sea and Wind"A collection of poems written in 5-7-5 format.
3 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Very well done, count is spot on and the first two lines have to interconnect so I am not sure of how the judges will take it. If you did it
Tranquil was the sea
until it joined with the wind -
its furry unfurled.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Very well done, count is spot on and the first two lines have to interconnect so I am not sure of how the judges will take it. If you did it
Tranquil was the sea
until it joined with the wind -
its furry unfurled.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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I thank you for the stars and the comments. Not sure how to connect them any more so.
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I never try to offend and I hope yu do not take it as that, just offered suggestion. Good luck
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Not offended. I just couldn't figure another way to put it. I really do appreciate yours and am getting ready to correct it to your suggestion. for that I thank you. Sorry, if I sounded like I wasn't grateful. Just needed to mull it over.
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I did not take it like that. I have been through he haiku ringer.lol
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I've done well with other haikus but I did need help on this one. Thanks.
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the main thing is connect the first two and make the wow of the third
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Thought I did.
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You did. And stated it nicely
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Thank you. I guess I'm a little absent minded at times.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Dear Mr. FM Wright,
The artwork is fantastic. I am learning more about Haiku poetry and this is beautiful. I love you take the picture and turn it into words. Fantastic! Fonda
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Dear Mr. FM Wright,
The artwork is fantastic. I am learning more about Haiku poetry and this is beautiful. I love you take the picture and turn it into words. Fantastic! Fonda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Thank you for the six stars. I am deeply humbled by your rating and review.
Comment from Sugarray77
A fine entry for the Haiku Contest. Your artwork is a very good addition and supportive of your poem. Good job on form and presentation. All the best,
Melissa
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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A fine entry for the Haiku Contest. Your artwork is a very good addition and supportive of your poem. Good job on form and presentation. All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Thank you for the wonderful stars, review and best wishes. They are very much appreciated.