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Breath of Life

We are the Potter's clay

5 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A very different take on the Adam and Eve beginnings here and I enjoyed your analogy to the potters wheel, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Dolly,

    Thank you for your great review. Your comments are always a lift to my spirit.

    Eugene
Comment from Chantae Harding
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The verses flow well. I love the punctuation that can be lacking from so many poems. You made the poem stronger with your punctuations. While I am not a religious person you piece touched me and made me wonder.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Chantae,

    Thank you for your great review. I am humbled by your words. Your comments are highly valued and appreciated.

    Eugene
Comment from meeshu
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This is a very good piece, consistent free verse with great
rhythm and flow. The message comes through loud and clear..

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Meeshu,

    Thank you. You are one of my favorite reviewers here on FS. Your comments are truly valued and appreciated.

    Eugene
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
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Isaiah 64:8 has always been one of my many favorite verses. Excellent chosen artwork. I loved the poem, the way it compared the potter's clay being formed into something beautiful and unique, just as our God has placed His hands on us, giving us life and uniqueness. Beautiful job!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    C. Gale Burnett

    Thank you for your great review. Your comments are highly valued and appreciated.

    Eugene
Comment from Earl Corp
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The analogy of God being potter is very conceivable. This poem hits almost every thing I look for in a poem. It makes sense, it's spiritual, and it touched me emotionally. Great job.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 02-Dec-2018
    Earl,

    Thank you for your great review. I am humbled by your words. Your comments are highly valued and appreciated.

    Eugene