Comment from RGstar

Excellent

Wow, bill, I wouldn't like to be dreaming these sorts of dreams nightly. I have heard of counting sheep, but let us say, I would be counting nightmares was I forced to have such imagery in my waking hours...especially 'counting warewolves.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thank you, RG

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Is this insomnia Bill? Not sure, but it sounds like a terrifying experience for the sheep! I sometimes suffer an never count sheep! A ghostly nightmarish write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. What is that creature - a werewolf? He looks more like some Marvel comic creature. What is a the walking fish reference? Aquaman? I don't think I'd fall asleep with this picture in mind, counting werewolves!

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Creature from the Black Lagoon, or the modern equivalent, the fishman from 'The Shape of Water'.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. I have no idea what this poem is about but it is well composed and illustrated. Rhyming is super. Cadence and flow roll along nicely. Marilyn

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks, Marilyn

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I would not care to count werewolves chasing sheep. This is kind of a twisted take on some of the things we hear as children==such as counting sheep and dreaming harmless dreams. You show the dark side where Dracula seems to have taken over. Well, to him the best things in life were dead, I suppose. Excellent rhyme and flow and an unusual subject. judi

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 28-Nov-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, I liked this dark poem which also follows a nice rhythm and rhyming. So it seems he has his demons to deal with as werewolves are chasing the sheep. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A wandering write of a wondering mind with a talent for rhyme -- really enjoyed it, Bill! :) ;) Even with the seemingly ominous picture, I think this is my fav in a while! :) ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks, Yvette

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Clever use of repeated rhymes and similar-sounding words. But why go toward darkness and danger? I don't think I could sleep at night if my mind were full of vampires. Somehow, that stuff doesn't bother guys as much. It's that crazy Y chromosome! :)

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

I?d do hearts and flowers, but then I?d be winning all the contests.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

Such an unusual idea for going to sleep. It would be hard to keep up with how werewolves are chasing sheep because I'd be watching for the sheep to escape. lol

Entertaining, good rhyme, and unusual. All good points.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

Thanks, da

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Oh, no!
I would much rather count werewolves than sheep, Bill.
You see, I suffer from Ovinaphobia, which is the irrational fear of sheep and goats.
Must be a religious thing.
Lemme tell ya, when it's difficult to go to sleep counting something you're afraid of doesn't make it any easier!
The Cowardly Lion of the Wizard of Oz fame also suffered from this same phobia.
Go figure...
~Dean

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018

You had to afraid of something, I guess.

reply by Dean Kuch on 28-Nov-2018

Yeah, I suppose.
But why sheep, of all things?