All Messed Up
a world messed up4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
1. Perfect choice of artwork. Appears to be an aerial view from space of our messed up planet Earth.
2. The black-colored backdrop you chose looks like outer space.
3. White lettering of poem, perfect.
4. Most impressive was the smooth flow of the poem and the MESSAGE of the poem. I totally agree with the message, but you said it all so eloquently. You wrote a book in just 12 lines. Awesome!
5. Enjoyed the rhyme.
6. You've got my vote! Best of luck in the contest :)
Blessings,
C. Gale Burnett
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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1. Perfect choice of artwork. Appears to be an aerial view from space of our messed up planet Earth.
2. The black-colored backdrop you chose looks like outer space.
3. White lettering of poem, perfect.
4. Most impressive was the smooth flow of the poem and the MESSAGE of the poem. I totally agree with the message, but you said it all so eloquently. You wrote a book in just 12 lines. Awesome!
5. Enjoyed the rhyme.
6. You've got my vote! Best of luck in the contest :)
Blessings,
C. Gale Burnett
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2018
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I am truly humbled by the rating and your truly wonderful comment. Thank you ever so much.
Comment from Kiera Haley
This is a really great approach to the topic! It really is the greatest mess imaginable, but I love how you began and ended positively. The poem has a really nice flow and your rhyming doesn't seem forced. Great job!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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This is a really great approach to the topic! It really is the greatest mess imaginable, but I love how you began and ended positively. The poem has a really nice flow and your rhyming doesn't seem forced. Great job!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful rating and the kind comment. It pretty much flowed by itself though I might have leaned it toward rhyming. Again, I very much appreciate your review.
Comment from Rob Caudle
A novel take on this prompt. I really liked it and what a mess we've made but as you point out all is not lost. There is a way for each of us to keep this mess from soiling our souls well don well said and again nice work with this prompt.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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A novel take on this prompt. I really liked it and what a mess we've made but as you point out all is not lost. There is a way for each of us to keep this mess from soiling our souls well don well said and again nice work with this prompt.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Well, thank you. I appreciate both the stars and the comment.
Comment from Sally Law
Amen! This is right to the heart of the matter in our messed up world. Jesus is the only one who can forgive sin and usher in order in our lives. I will be voting for you in the contest, as well!
All my best,
Sally
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Amen! This is right to the heart of the matter in our messed up world. Jesus is the only one who can forgive sin and usher in order in our lives. I will be voting for you in the contest, as well!
All my best,
Sally
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thank you ever so much for the stars, comment and support. They are all very much appreciated!
