Ker-Plop
Just dropping by...9 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ya know, Yvette, zombies always lose their minds under very stressful situations.
They allow things to eat away at them until it causes them to react as if they hadn't a brain in their heads.
Or their stomachs, heh-heh.
Congrats on your second place finish.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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Ya know, Yvette, zombies always lose their minds under very stressful situations.
They allow things to eat away at them until it causes them to react as if they hadn't a brain in their heads.
Or their stomachs, heh-heh.
Congrats on your second place finish.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2018
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LOL! Thanx for the wonderful words and review, Dean -- so good to hear from you! :) :) :) You know, I actually wrote this to make fun of the number of zombie prompts in a row...was pleasantly surprised to see he actually made other folks smile as well!! ;) :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week!! :) :) Yvette
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Grnnnnnnnnmmmmph, lol...
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This was hysterical! I love the artwork you chose; it complemented your poem. You did 17 syllables, as required. I loved how you played with the font size; this was a plus in your presentation. The green backdrop you chose was perfect; it appealed to the eye, and matched the green in artwork. Upon further examination, I noticed that you matched your font color (gray) to the gray in the artwork. All of this was very cleverly done. Great Job! Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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This was hysterical! I love the artwork you chose; it complemented your poem. You did 17 syllables, as required. I loved how you played with the font size; this was a plus in your presentation. The green backdrop you chose was perfect; it appealed to the eye, and matched the green in artwork. Upon further examination, I noticed that you matched your font color (gray) to the gray in the artwork. All of this was very cleverly done. Great Job! Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for dropping by for the read and reveiw and for your wonderful comments, Gale -- most appreciated! ;) Have a wonderful evening! :)
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
lol, That was really funny. His head just fell off, nice one! A terrific entry for the zombie contest. Good luck, mystery writer. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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lol, That was really funny. His head just fell off, nice one! A terrific entry for the zombie contest. Good luck, mystery writer. ~Kerry
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for dropping by, Kerry, and glad this silly made you smile! :) It was my protest the number 'zombie writes' that seem to have cropped up lately...lol! :) :) Have a great evening! :)
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lol, You're very welcome, so sorry for the late reply.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I don't know why I like this scrazy poem so much, but I do.
Guess it's because you did so much with the prompt. Silly me did not understand your first line. Then I read the contest prompt and literally said "of course. How perfect."
Hope you win. This is cleverly wonderful.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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I don't know why I like this scrazy poem so much, but I do.
Guess it's because you did so much with the prompt. Silly me did not understand your first line. Then I read the contest prompt and literally said "of course. How perfect."
Hope you win. This is cleverly wonderful.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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You are too funny!! :) :) ;) This was my 'protest' to the multiple zombie prompts in a few days' time! :) ;) Glad it made you smile with six-stars!! :) ;) Take care of you! :)
Comment from jenintorre
Very cute and funny. This is a very good entry for thd Zombie competition. I love the illustration that you have chosen. Good luck anc best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Very cute and funny. This is a very good entry for thd Zombie competition. I love the illustration that you have chosen. Good luck anc best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Was my "had enough of zombies" protest (LOL!) - glad it made you smile! :) ;) Thanx for stopping by! ;)
Comment from Earl Corp
This was hilarious! Not a fan of the 5-7-5 format but this one is good. I haven't read any other entries but this one looks like the winner to me. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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This was hilarious! Not a fan of the 5-7-5 format but this one is good. I haven't read any other entries but this one looks like the winner to me. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Earl, and glad it made you smile! :) Was kindof my little 'protest' to all the 'zombie stuff"!! :) ;) Have a great day! ;)
Comment from Sugarray77
Hahah. I love this humorous and fun verse you created for the contest. The vivid artwork enhances it greatly and carries your theme. Good luck in the Zombie competition.
Melissa
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Hahah. I love this humorous and fun verse you created for the contest. The vivid artwork enhances it greatly and carries your theme. Good luck in the Zombie competition.
Melissa
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping by, Melissa, and glad it made you smile! :) Was kindof my little 'protest' to all the 'zombie stuff"!! :) ;) Have a great day! ;)
Comment from Michele Harber
This is a very cute, very clever, albeit slightly disgusting (but what about a zombie isn't?) poem, that fully follows the five-seven-five syllable count requirement. This is a worthy entry in the Zombie 5-7-5 contest, and I wish you luck.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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This is a very cute, very clever, albeit slightly disgusting (but what about a zombie isn't?) poem, that fully follows the five-seven-five syllable count requirement. This is a worthy entry in the Zombie 5-7-5 contest, and I wish you luck.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Michele -- much appreciated. :)
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My pleasure.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I think this very comical. I guess it could be called a tragicomedy seventeen syllable Zombie losing its head poem. I guess the figure of speech used here could not be termed personification as it is already a person whose head bobbed. But you couldn't really call it animation since the person is not very animated because they are already dead. Their time for animation is quite passed. It seems the only thing moving in this poem is the head. There must be some figure of speech here, but I'll be darned if I can name it. But I do love the humor in this poem. Very fun.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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I think this very comical. I guess it could be called a tragicomedy seventeen syllable Zombie losing its head poem. I guess the figure of speech used here could not be termed personification as it is already a person whose head bobbed. But you couldn't really call it animation since the person is not very animated because they are already dead. Their time for animation is quite passed. It seems the only thing moving in this poem is the head. There must be some figure of speech here, but I'll be darned if I can name it. But I do love the humor in this poem. Very fun.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Liz, and the grin....guess you could tell I was tired of the zombie thing...:) ;) LOL! Much appreciated. :)
