It's All How You Look At It
An 8-word poem contest entry16 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Sunshine sure has its illusions. One is thinking that you're watching the whole sun, but you don't. Nice work. Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors in this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Sunshine sure has its illusions. One is thinking that you're watching the whole sun, but you don't. Nice work. Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors in this poem.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
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You're welcome and you Too have a wonderful week.
Comment from Zue65
Yes, the first impression can blind our eyes for awhile and can deceive our hearts but eventually we will wake up to the truth and the reality of it all. I enjoyed the message of this poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Yes, the first impression can blind our eyes for awhile and can deceive our hearts but eventually we will wake up to the truth and the reality of it all. I enjoyed the message of this poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an excellent and witty poem you have crafted. With the limitations, you have written an exceptional verse. All the best and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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This is an excellent and witty poem you have crafted. With the limitations, you have written an exceptional verse. All the best and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from beizanten
A very beautiful picture and presentation of the poem. you fulfill the criteria well though I don't get what you poetry imply can you please tell me. Other than that good luck with your contest!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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A very beautiful picture and presentation of the poem. you fulfill the criteria well though I don't get what you poetry imply can you please tell me. Other than that good luck with your contest!
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
Comment from fm wright
Your words speak so much truth and say so much with so few words used. The artwork is wonderful and I don't see anything that I would change. Best of wishes in the contest with this entry!
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Your words speak so much truth and say so much with so few words used. The artwork is wonderful and I don't see anything that I would change. Best of wishes in the contest with this entry!
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
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You're welcome and same to you!
Comment from Donka Kristeva
Well expressed insight. It is not about the outward sun, however important it is for our survival and well being but the inner light that illumines our life path.
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reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Well expressed insight. It is not about the outward sun, however important it is for our survival and well being but the inner light that illumines our life path.
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Thanx so much for stopping in for the read and review -- have a wonderful weekend! :)
