Back in time
Too late now22 total reviews
Comment from Jaye Bennett
A very introspective poem, and perhaps one with which most of us can identify. Your rhyming is well done. Your thoughts are laid out in order. Your word choices are well selected. Good job.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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A very introspective poem, and perhaps one with which most of us can identify. Your rhyming is well done. Your thoughts are laid out in order. Your word choices are well selected. Good job.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Many thaks for yourgreat review.
Comment from DonandVicki
I just wonder how many of us wish we could go back in time and correct some or all of the errors that we made on our journey through this life. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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I just wonder how many of us wish we could go back in time and correct some or all of the errors that we made on our journey through this life. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Jen. I do not have many regrets. I inherited all of the health issues from both parents and added a few of my own. My only regret is that my health is so bad. Congrats on being third. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Hi Jen. I do not have many regrets. I inherited all of the health issues from both parents and added a few of my own. My only regret is that my health is so bad. Congrats on being third. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Many thanks for reading and reviewing. X
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Back in time", is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. I feel sure many of this talented poet's readers would have very little trouble relating to this. To me, it's a six, but I only have fives left.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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"Back in time", is an exceptionally well-written and heart-wrenching piece. I feel sure many of this talented poet's readers would have very little trouble relating to this. To me, it's a six, but I only have fives left.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
Jen, you certainly deserved it.
Bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from Thomas Bowling
I also wish I could go back in time. I would travel back one week and win the lottery. Wouldn't that be great? So much better than having dinner with someone famous.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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I also wish I could go back in time. I would travel back one week and win the lottery. Wouldn't that be great? So much better than having dinner with someone famous.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2018
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Your review is very funny but I don't quite understand the famous person bit. Jen x
Comment from Loredana
I like this poem a lot. So many regrets expressed yet veiled. Good choice of words that make the audience relate...we all made mistakes and we all would love to go back in time. The rhyming scheme helps the poem to flow smoothly.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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I like this poem a lot. So many regrets expressed yet veiled. Good choice of words that make the audience relate...we all made mistakes and we all would love to go back in time. The rhyming scheme helps the poem to flow smoothly.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from royowen
I think most of us would like to go back in time, I guess that's why we take the lessons we learn and do better in the now. It's hard to drive a car looking in the rear view mirror and no expect accidents. Beautifully written work, with some poignantly true comments, great language and aabb cdd eeff, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I think most of us would like to go back in time, I guess that's why we take the lessons we learn and do better in the now. It's hard to drive a car looking in the rear view mirror and no expect accidents. Beautifully written work, with some poignantly true comments, great language and aabb cdd eeff, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thanks Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there, Jen. Oh my, this poem really reflects my life, awe...if we can only go back. Or even if we knew then what we know now. I love this poem, it has truly resonated with me. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hello there, Jen. Oh my, this poem really reflects my life, awe...if we can only go back. Or even if we knew then what we know now. I love this poem, it has truly resonated with me. ~Kerry
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I love your review Kerry. Thanks, so pleased you liked my poem.
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My pleasure:) Happy Thanksgiving!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a wonderful poem about a topic we all ponder--that is--if we could go back and change something in our lives, would we. Most of us would agree with the words of your poem. Good luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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This is a wonderful poem about a topic we all ponder--that is--if we could go back and change something in our lives, would we. Most of us would agree with the words of your poem. Good luck in the contest with this terrific entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Many thanks Marilyn
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A cleverly written poem and the sentiments are meloncholy and no one lives a perfect life, we all make mistakes and it sounds like you have learned from them, look to the future, it is bright and you have a wealth of experience behind you to live it better, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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A cleverly written poem and the sentiments are meloncholy and no one lives a perfect life, we all make mistakes and it sounds like you have learned from them, look to the future, it is bright and you have a wealth of experience behind you to live it better, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Thanks a lot for the review.
