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Family Ties Volume two.

Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Sister Susan Sowing Socks."
Second book Of Series.

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Okay rhonnie69
I had fun with your tongue twister in rhyme,
now I going to try and fun figuring out your twister without the letter S.
Will be waiting for your reply.

Gert

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
    HELLO GERT: Happy Thanksgiving to ya. I'm so glad that our God blessed me with a friend like you. You are a writer...a master with words. So...make good use of your skill with words. Watch them carefully, and closely. While you may not be able to write Sister Susan Sewing Socks without using the letter...S. You can write the word, THAT, and not use the letter...S at all. I said: "You can write, THAT without using the letter...S. And you certainly can...HOW? Like this...T-H-A-T. See ya real soon, Gert. God bless. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Gert sherwood on 21-Nov-2018
    Happy (Thanksgiving)
    thank you for-giving me that clue.
    Will take time to tackle
    Gert


Comment from BeasPeas
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I can tell that you like to do puzzles and present them to others. Riddles. You will have to revise your pen name The Riddler. I'm going to wait for you to supply the answer. Good post to your tongue twister. Marilyn

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
    HELLO BEASPEAS: I just read your reply to my comments on your posting, "sisters." Thank you. You deserve a top-flight review on that one. As for this riddle you'll have to read it closely and watchfully. Tell me, BeasPeas. Can you write, (THAT, ) without using the letter...S. The trick is in the word..".THAT."
Comment from Michele Harber
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I'll answer your question as soon as I finish untying my tongue. I was doing fine up until the third line, where I had Sister Susan showing socks for sillings. This was fun, and a well-done tongue-twister. As for your question, I write that as "t-h-a-t," with no "s" in sight.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    HELLO MICHELE HARBER: Thank you for reading and viewing my work here. My fourth grade teacher gave me the idea for this tongue-twister. My mom gave me the idea for the, "t-h-a-t," part of it. It was so much fun that I just had to share it up until this day. Thank you for your witty participation. God bless you, Michele. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Michele Harber on 19-Nov-2018
    It's wonderful to see a young, talented poet have so much fun with it. Your teacher and mother are very good influences, but the writing is yours alone, and you should be very proud of it.
Comment from Wetbelly01
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Yep, you've definitely got a good tongue twister here!
It reminds me of a similar adage... "Railroad crossing, look out for cars"...
can you spell that without any R's? (THAT)... I Like your brain twisters,
They're really fun! My compliments!

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    HELLO WETBELLY: You've got the solution right. The railroad crossing one I got from my mom when I was a kid. That helped me think of this one. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by Wetbelly01 on 19-Nov-2018
    Hey, keep 'em comin'!