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Love of Animals

Viewing comments for Chapter 78 "The Party"
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Comment from BeasPeas
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Oh my goodness. That wasn't so much fun as everyone thought. I don't think I'd like a piece of that birthday cake. Perfect shape to your pyramid. Marilyn

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
    Me neither ! Thanks for your kind review
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oooh Nooo!!! No the teeth!! :) :) What a fun poem: a pyramid poem -- I like it!! :) ;) And this one is exceptionally fun with your topic -- although, I have to tell you, that I'm glad you went with the illustrated 'calm' kitchen because it actually adds to the 'story-telling' aura that your poem seems to have! ;) Be sure to pop back in there and change "one hundrd and" to 'one hundred and'..:) ;) Thanx for sharing, ma'am, and have a Happy Thanxgiving! :) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
    Oooh Yesss, the teeth!! I ?popped? back in, and now ?hundred? stands corrected . Thanks for a fun review and positivity
    Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good presentation and poem
for this challenge, Trisha.
-I like the format.
-Good description and detail
about this bash for Grandma!
-It sounds like quite an event.
-I like the ending when
"the tables were turned!"
-Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
    False teeth are a fear of mine! I appreciated your great review..
    Hugs, Trisha
reply by Pam (respa) on 21-Nov-2018
    You are welcome, Trisha.
Comment from Jean Hornby
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This poem began serious but then the end was unpredictable which made it so funny . It is a light happy read that showed fun, seriousness and humour all thrown into one little poem . I enjoyed this immensely

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    I?m confused! You enjoyed reading it, but rate it a 4 star. It would be more helpful to me to say how it could be improved. When you review people?s work that?s what they look for.
    Thanks for reading.
reply by Jean Hornby on 19-Nov-2018
    Four star is good
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    How can I make it better than good?
reply by Jean Hornby on 19-Nov-2018
    I have now given you 5 stars for this piece : )
    I think the end would flow better if you removed
    ( almost ) so it would read
    Laughed , lost her teeth, which became part of the trash
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    Good job,,,,,much better, thank you. I will take a second look without promise to change. I appreciated your pleasant attitude.
reply by Jean Hornby on 19-Nov-2018
    My pleasure : )
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
    Mine too!