An Autumn Sonnet
An acrostic contest entry44 total reviews
Comment from Anntonette
I love! Its different from other sonnets, the verses are full of vibration and vibrant colors. Autumn is one of those short seasons, so why not make a sonnet about autumn!
Great appreciation post upon seasonal autumn :))
- Anntonette J
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I love! Its different from other sonnets, the verses are full of vibration and vibrant colors. Autumn is one of those short seasons, so why not make a sonnet about autumn!
Great appreciation post upon seasonal autumn :))
- Anntonette J
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I love how you say "An Autumn Sonnet" is "full of vibration and vibrant colors." I truly appreciate your kind praise, Anntonette. Many thanks, Rod
Comment from country ranch writer
Times are gone but not forgotten memories of time past still live on and the trees rember the kindness and happiness they once were able to provide to lovers.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Times are gone but not forgotten memories of time past still live on and the trees rember the kindness and happiness they once were able to provide to lovers.
Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I am so pleased you enjoyed "An Autumn Sonnet," CRW. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Donka Kristeva
A lovely description of an Autumn dawn. It took me along the walk. The mood is nostalgic and somewhat in tune with a "season" gone. The images are outstanding and the artwork, stunning.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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A lovely description of an Autumn dawn. It took me along the walk. The mood is nostalgic and somewhat in tune with a "season" gone. The images are outstanding and the artwork, stunning.
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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I am delighted I could take you on a walk through the Autumn woods, Donka, and that you enjoyed the experience. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Galactia
Hi
This is an excellent written Acrostic poem. I liked how you tried to make it into a sonnet. all your lines have 8 syllables, which you can actually write sonnets using 8 syllables. Though you did use the Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg which your rhyme scheme is spot on. The poem itself I feel is fantastic. Normally in a competition, I would probably knock a star or two if you said it's supposed to be a sonnet and it's in a contest. The reason why I am not is that you have entered an acrostic poetry contest and that's exactly what yours is. AN exceptional written one at that. If you want it to be a sonnet, play around with yours a bit more to get it into proper meter.
Good Luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Hi
This is an excellent written Acrostic poem. I liked how you tried to make it into a sonnet. all your lines have 8 syllables, which you can actually write sonnets using 8 syllables. Though you did use the Shakespearean sonnet rhyme scheme of abab cdcd efef gg which your rhyme scheme is spot on. The poem itself I feel is fantastic. Normally in a competition, I would probably knock a star or two if you said it's supposed to be a sonnet and it's in a contest. The reason why I am not is that you have entered an acrostic poetry contest and that's exactly what yours is. AN exceptional written one at that. If you want it to be a sonnet, play around with yours a bit more to get it into proper meter.
Good Luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2018
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Ah, Tia, I am so pleased you enjoyed my Autumn poem no matter what one may call it. Thank you so much for sharing and your very kind praise. Rod
