Love of Animals
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8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Love the artwork depicting both sides, the human and nature for your Quadrilew Trisha. Yes, we al need a place to call home, human and animal, surely this world's big enough for both forms. Lovely opening verse, and your repeated lines work well in a great read.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Love the artwork depicting both sides, the human and nature for your Quadrilew Trisha. Yes, we al need a place to call home, human and animal, surely this world's big enough for both forms. Lovely opening verse, and your repeated lines work well in a great read.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 22-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2018
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Whoopee! 3 leaf pile now is wonderful! Thank you very much
Hugs, Trisha. I?m so glad you enjoyed my poetry
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks the condemnable nature or killing nature of human beings and living things; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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This poem speaks the condemnable nature or killing nature of human beings and living things; well said, well done. Keep Writing Inspire Changing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thanks Al, yes Man is getting greedier.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from damommy
Good presentation. The photo is pretty and very interesting. Your syllable count if off in some places, but the poem read well. I messed up on mine, too. 8-)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Good presentation. The photo is pretty and very interesting. Your syllable count if off in some places, but the poem read well. I messed up on mine, too. 8-)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thanks, I found this one a little confusing
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Quadrilew about nature and how humans have taken from nature more than they really deserve at the cost of the animals and nature itself
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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A very well-written Quadrilew about nature and how humans have taken from nature more than they really deserve at the cost of the animals and nature itself
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thanks, Sandra - I especially thought of S. Africa with. The killing of
Animals for ivory
And skins. In USA it?s for jackets shoes or watches and it?s people killed. Thank you wry much for your kind review. Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Lady Jane
Kill is intendid - 'intended'
What an interesting format, dear. Your story of humanity vs nature is well rounded and addressed in a very adequate manner. Your explanation of habitat's domain and the whys, whens, and hows is formatted with simplicity and perfect syllable count. That final stanza, we've caused our poor wildlife to be on the hunt for a new home, is so profoundly driven home. Good job meeting the demands of the poetic style flawlessly! And might I add how absolutely perfect that image is? It's so lovely, but fitting to the topic of this piece.
Good luck, dear. Keep writing.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Kill is intendid - 'intended'
What an interesting format, dear. Your story of humanity vs nature is well rounded and addressed in a very adequate manner. Your explanation of habitat's domain and the whys, whens, and hows is formatted with simplicity and perfect syllable count. That final stanza, we've caused our poor wildlife to be on the hunt for a new home, is so profoundly driven home. Good job meeting the demands of the poetic style flawlessly! And might I add how absolutely perfect that image is? It's so lovely, but fitting to the topic of this piece.
Good luck, dear. Keep writing.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you for great, complimentary review. It?s an honor.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
So, this is the second of this kind I've read this morning and .... wow! :) A great form that I'm really not sure I would have the patience for....but what a wonderful creation you have managed here, ma'am -- so love it's feels and the lasting impression it leaves! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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So, this is the second of this kind I've read this morning and .... wow! :) A great form that I'm really not sure I would have the patience for....but what a wonderful creation you have managed here, ma'am -- so love it's feels and the lasting impression it leaves! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Your compliments are appreciated. I do these callenges to keep the brain box rattling!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Galactia
Hi
Excellent written poem. I have never done this form before but just going off your author notes. Your syllable count is spot on but if all the rhyme scheme is meant to be abab, then your rhyme scheme is out. The last stanza is correct, stanza 1-3 are out.
The artwork you chose is Gorgeous.
Great job
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Hi
Excellent written poem. I have never done this form before but just going off your author notes. Your syllable count is spot on but if all the rhyme scheme is meant to be abab, then your rhyme scheme is out. The last stanza is correct, stanza 1-3 are out.
The artwork you chose is Gorgeous.
Great job
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2018
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Thank you , I?m glad you enjoyed the poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An interesting write Trisha, we all share this planet an we should give consideration to all creatures, humans being the most intelligent should allow all creatures to live in harmony allowing nature to take it's course without interference which is what I think you are saying here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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An interesting write Trisha, we all share this planet an we should give consideration to all creatures, humans being the most intelligent should allow all creatures to live in harmony allowing nature to take it's course without interference which is what I think you are saying here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Yes, Man is too fond of taking for self because animals have no choice. I see it Florida all the time. When we came it was beautiful here . We were told ? Oh no! They can?t build on preserve land.? Guess what $ talks and less than 2 years after we bought,, they tore down many tress to build. Now, it?s like a concrete jungle, wildlife has disappeared.
Thanks so much for your review,
Hugs, Trisha
