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Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "The Valley of The Spiritual Orbs"A Children's Story Book.
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Comment from mermaids
Your use of words take the reader to another reality and your description of heaven maybe on track. You have a strong steady beat and a vivid use of words that takes the reader to another place.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Your use of words take the reader to another reality and your description of heaven maybe on track. You have a strong steady beat and a vivid use of words that takes the reader to another place.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2018
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Many times for God share his secrets..
Thanks Elaine...(Mermaids)
Ricky....
Comment from rjuselius
this is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Ricky! You always seem to have some insight into my poems. I am not sure how to repay all kind reviews. but I am not totally a loss with your piece. what I do like about the write is how you have found different ways to have mythical elements be in total sync with the so-called real world.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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this is an intriguing piece of poetry dear Ricky! You always seem to have some insight into my poems. I am not sure how to repay all kind reviews. but I am not totally a loss with your piece. what I do like about the write is how you have found different ways to have mythical elements be in total sync with the so-called real world.
thank you for sharing!
Blessings and a hearty hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2018
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Thanks Ryan
rj for your thoughts and kind review.
Doctor Ricky
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