Holiday and Holyday Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "A Christmas Message"religious and holiday poetry
4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, A CHRISTMAS MESSAGE, follows the vertical theme and presents a list of what we hope to experience when this time of year rolls around. Nice.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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This acrostic poem, A CHRISTMAS MESSAGE, follows the vertical theme and presents a list of what we hope to experience when this time of year rolls around. Nice.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2018
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your comments and rating. Dove
Comment from Boogienights
This is very nice, you have definitely listed all the joys of Christmas. I did however find it very difficult to read the font with your chosen colors. May I suggest Red and Green to go along with your Christmas theme. I would also recommend making the first letter of every line bigger and bolder so "A Christmas Message" stands out. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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This is very nice, you have definitely listed all the joys of Christmas. I did however find it very difficult to read the font with your chosen colors. May I suggest Red and Green to go along with your Christmas theme. I would also recommend making the first letter of every line bigger and bolder so "A Christmas Message" stands out. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Dear Boogienights, Thank you for your comments, review and suggestions.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Good choice of phrase for your acrostic.
-You have used some good imagery
as you reflect on the upcoming season.
-It is a light and happy poem, with
"Holly on the bush" "Ride through the snowfall"
and "Tinsel on the tree"
-Ironically, in the Mid Atlantic region
we are getting snow today--way too early!!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Good choice of phrase for your acrostic.
-You have used some good imagery
as you reflect on the upcoming season.
-It is a light and happy poem, with
"Holly on the bush" "Ride through the snowfall"
and "Tinsel on the tree"
-Ironically, in the Mid Atlantic region
we are getting snow today--way too early!!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Dear Pam, Thank you for your comments and rating.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from country ranch writer
Nice work up for your poem reminding us Christmas is just around the corner. Seems to sneak up on us every year and we have to hustle to get it all done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Nice work up for your poem reminding us Christmas is just around the corner. Seems to sneak up on us every year and we have to hustle to get it all done.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018
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Dear country ranch writer, Thank you for your comments and rating.
