Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Never forget... all those who fought for all of us all these times. I was in Washington DC for a few days last summer. Arlington seems to go on forever. So sad to know that so many, and so very many more, have lost their lives to war. Well said.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2018

Thanks for the insightful review. Wish we had stuck to "war to end all wars." sigh, j

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This naani, Between the Rows, uses four lines and twenty-one syllables and brings our thoughts to a Veterans' Day sight that reminds us of loss, sacrifice, and honor.

 Comment Written 15-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018

Thanks Bill for your insightful review. Even in death, these soldiers stand at attention. Lest we forget. j

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Author,


OooOOOooOoo... what a lovely poem with an even lovelier and more powerful sentiment! I can imagine that a great many readers will love this one. The images are frank and real and the words you've chosen are delightful to create the crisp, horrid picture. Good luck!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. Even in death, the soldiers remain in formation. sigh. judester

Comment from mbagby23

Excellent

Very well written. I also love the picture as well. Good luck in the contest. The winds are very chilly where I am living. Feels more like winter even fall.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2018

Thanks for the encouraging review. Am house-sitting in the country for a week in countryside Quebec. Very cold here also but I take my walk through the forest and frozen apple trees every morning. Keep cosy. judester