Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is vivid even in this short form. the picture you chose speaks a thousand words..

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanx so much for stopping by for the read and review, dude - these short forms really make me crazy, but they are really a fun challenge for a logical mind!! :) ;) ;) Be sure to take care and have a great week ahead! :) ;)

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Excellent

Excellent use of words. Poignant, deep and emotionally intense. Very expressive. Art work is as expressive and a perfect fit for the poem.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanx so much for stopping by for the read and review, Donka -- your positive comments are so very much appreciated! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :) ;)

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Sorry, I'm all out of sixes or you would get one. This poem certainly deserves it. I have read some of the other contest submissions. This is by far the best of the lot.

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 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018

Thanx so much for stopping by for the read and review, Thomas -- and your comments here are a wonderful smile for my face today....virtual or not, the fact that you though it deserved six stars means enough! :) ;) Have a great week ahead! :) ;)