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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Bill. I am so far behind in reviewing. Just getting to this. Something different from you. I believe you are right. I have never tried to be published. I imagine upon my departure, my poetry will not be read by anyone. Good job. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
    We are known, Pam. People read us and it cost us a few bucks a year to get the adoration of our peers. We?re a nonprofit.
Comment from brenda faye curtis
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I'm not sure what to think. It seems as if the first stanza does not belong with the others, as it states the efforts are pointless. The rest seems to build a more positive statement.
At any rate, your poems and stories enrich the lives of those who read them. Isn't that what art is meant to do?

 Comment Written 12-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2018
    Sometimes a song sung blue will bring a lunk outta da funk. : )
reply by brenda faye curtis on 13-Nov-2018
    That's true! :)
Comment from BeasPeas
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An excellent write, Bill. Maybe we should stop right here and chuck the computer out the window. Most likely, only a small percentage will every get published. Hmmm! Food for thought. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from Boogienights
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You wrote a poem about me..how nice! You could be talking about any of us really...I feel as you do. I'm as addicted to FanStory however, so published eventually or not, I will continue on.

 Comment Written 11-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
    Thanks, BN, for giving this a look. Bill
reply by Boogienights on 11-Nov-2018
Comment from Teri7
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Bill, This is a very well written poem about all the time you spend on reading and writing your poetry. My favorite lines were:
One day I'll be a famous author
like Dr. Seuss or Jeffy Chaucer
like Patterson in ev'ry genre
Aussies will say "Hey, Good on ya!"

Keep on writing my friend! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from lyenochka
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Love your humor and bright presentation, Bill. We can all relate. If our friends and family are happy to read our works, that may be a good enough goal for me.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka. That was a very kind thing to say.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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This is a fun read Bill, about the writing, writing from dusk to dawn, but seeming to not get anywhere with it. I always say my writing keeps me sane, (well I hope it does LOL). Loved the colourful presentation, were you channeling Dr Suess. Keep writing, and most important,having fun with it.
cheers

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Pearl, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from dragonpoet
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This is a witty poem about the time we take to write and all we do do get inspired to write. It shows how most writers doubt their abilities.

Keep writing and reading. Both are honorable uses of time.

Joan

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Joan, for giving this a look. Bill
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Nov-2018
    No problem, Bill.

    Joan
Comment from Earl Corp
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Hey Bill none of us are there yet, this could be used as a theme for all of us. But for some reason we all keep plugging away at it. This would have been a good contest entry.

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Earl.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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A delightful and, yeah I have to say it, colorful write you have penned here! :) ;) I can tell that story with 'no l's' left an impression on you as well -- LOL! :) :) Thanx for the smile today! :) ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 10-Nov-2018


reply by the author on 10-Nov-2018
    Thanks, Yv3tte, for giving this a look. Bill