"Miracles"
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Comment from Earl Corp
This was an interesting poem. I enjoyed the story of Gessy, that was pretty cool how it ended. I think you misspelled tragic. One question: I thought Jews don't believe in an afterlife, though I agree the jews deserve to go to heaven and the Nazis straight to hell. Nice job.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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This was an interesting poem. I enjoyed the story of Gessy, that was pretty cool how it ended. I think you misspelled tragic. One question: I thought Jews don't believe in an afterlife, though I agree the jews deserve to go to heaven and the Nazis straight to hell. Nice job.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Do the Jews believe in 'Afterlife?'
Christ died and was crucified for our and The High Jewish Priests sins.
If you believe in 'Thr Second Comibg' then you believe in ' The Afterlife.'
Thanks Sir Earl.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow! What a wonderful and uplifting story for Gessay to be born from 'the ashes' so that she could live a long and fruitful life!! :) ;) Thank you for bringing her story to all of us! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Wow! What a wonderful and uplifting story for Gessay to be born from 'the ashes' so that she could live a long and fruitful life!! :) ;) Thank you for bringing her story to all of us! :) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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My Pleasure!
As always Yours...
Ricky1024....
Comment from meeshu
I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is vivid and your imagination shines right through. Well done, Ricky. excellent storytelling............meeshu
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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I enjoyed reading this work a great deal. The imagery is vivid and your imagination shines right through. Well done, Ricky. excellent storytelling............meeshu
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanks again meeshu.
Doctor Ricky1024
Comment from susand3022
Hi! I really liked this story of a child born from death. It's a horrid thing to happen but it sometimes does. Not usually like this though! My only problem was the WWII lesson. I'm not quite sure what it was about. Did it have something to do with the circumstances of her birth? If so then there needs to be a more direct pathway drawn between the two. If it is just to reinforce the time in which she was born, I'm not sure it is really necessary. If you had wanted to direct attention to the time period you may want to consider a topic more relevant to the circumstances of her birth. Why did her mother jump? A very cool story though, a great find!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Hi! I really liked this story of a child born from death. It's a horrid thing to happen but it sometimes does. Not usually like this though! My only problem was the WWII lesson. I'm not quite sure what it was about. Did it have something to do with the circumstances of her birth? If so then there needs to be a more direct pathway drawn between the two. If it is just to reinforce the time in which she was born, I'm not sure it is really necessary. If you had wanted to direct attention to the time period you may want to consider a topic more relevant to the circumstances of her birth. Why did her mother jump? A very cool story though, a great find!
Comment Written 09-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Time Period reference showing her mothers immediate pain and, of course, the Jews.
Doctor Ricky1024