haiku (the weeping willow)
5-7-5 poem contest3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is a very powerful message. The imagery will draw the reader in. The personification makes the cautionary tale stronger. It is as if the4 weeping willow is foreshadowing personified. You have good use of alliteration at just the right points where the reader is invited to pause to fully comprehend the message carried herein. well written.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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This is a very powerful message. The imagery will draw the reader in. The personification makes the cautionary tale stronger. It is as if the4 weeping willow is foreshadowing personified. You have good use of alliteration at just the right points where the reader is invited to pause to fully comprehend the message carried herein. well written.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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I appreciate you taking time to read and review my 5-7-5 poem.
Comment from DonandVicki
Willow weep for us, The once UNITED States of America. Your poem comes at a terrible rift in our world. It almost seems like a civil war again. Don and Vicki
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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Willow weep for us, The once UNITED States of America. Your poem comes at a terrible rift in our world. It almost seems like a civil war again. Don and Vicki
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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I appreciate you taking time to read and review my 5-7-5 poem.
Comment from country ranch writer
The weeping willow reminds me of my grandpa's place I used to play under the weeping willows when I was a kid and hide under them to write in my journals.
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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The weeping willow reminds me of my grandpa's place I used to play under the weeping willows when I was a kid and hide under them to write in my journals.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 11-Nov-2018
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I appreciate you taking time to read and review my 5-7-5 poem.