Break of Morning
There's a magic at daybreak...15 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery in the poem
with 'misty dreams,' 'magical wings,'
and 'moonbeams.'
-Effective us of alliteration, as well.
-I like the last line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like the imagery in the poem
with 'misty dreams,' 'magical wings,'
and 'moonbeams.'
-Effective us of alliteration, as well.
-I like the last line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping in, Pam -- always appreciate the read and review! :) ;) Have a great weekend and be sure to catch at least one of the sunrises in there!! :) ;)
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You are very welcome. You have a great weekend, too.
Comment from rspoet
You've written a very fine 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and solid use of alliteration
Magical poem to match the impressive art work
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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You've written a very fine 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and solid use of alliteration
Magical poem to match the impressive art work
Well done
Best wishes in the contest
RS
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping in, RS -- always appreciate the read and review! :) ;) Have a great weekend and be sure to catch at least one of the sunrises in there!! :) ;)
Comment from DonandVicki
The photograph that you have chosen is truly spectacular and enhances your poem. The dawn or sunset truly are a gift and a blessing from God. Don and Vicki.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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The photograph that you have chosen is truly spectacular and enhances your poem. The dawn or sunset truly are a gift and a blessing from God. Don and Vicki.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping in, Don and Vicki -- always appreciate the read and review! :) ;) You both have a great weekend and be sure to catch at least one of the sunrises in there!! :) ;)
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This is magical. Such lovely imagery and words that create a spellbound dawn. The art work is equally magical and fascinating. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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This is magical. Such lovely imagery and words that create a spellbound dawn. The art work is equally magical and fascinating. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping in, Donka -- always appreciate the read and review! :) ;) Have a great weekend and be sure to catch at least one of the sunrises in there!! :) ;)
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
The 5-7-5 lines you wrote descriptively defines the title of your poem. Both words and illustration are beautiful! Your poem made me sigh inside my soul. Good work!
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reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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The 5-7-5 lines you wrote descriptively defines the title of your poem. Both words and illustration are beautiful! Your poem made me sigh inside my soul. Good work!
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2018
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Thanx for stopping in, C. Gale -- always appreciate the read and review! :) ;) Have a great weekend and be sure to catch at least one of the sunrises in there!! :) ;)
